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Which one should I finish and work up?


Lee Knight

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Two different tunes here. I need to pick one and button up the music and lyric as needed. First is Till the Battle Has Been Won, then below is Cruel. And if anyone has ideas to throw at either of these, I'll catch!

 

Not sure what kind of music this one might have. Probably an uppish pop thing to counter the morose theme:

 

Till the Battle Has Been Won

 

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If I could take back what I said

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till the battle has been won


Cruel is good and I think you should finish at some point, but with I'm not as excited about it because it is so Highway 61esc

 

 

What he said.

 

Although ... you could escape the Bob Dylan comparison by eliminating or rewriting that first verse.

 

Both have some really cool lines, but "Till the Battle..." wins overall.

 

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