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I'm liking it. I think it almost works without a bass. Nice job especially on the ryhthem stuff.

 

Vocals are a bit recessed making it hard to understand.

 

Long music-only interlude exceeded my attention span at about the 50% point. It's good but not *that* good. Same thing on the closing music-only section. Of course, since you categorized this as psychedelic rock... maybe I was not in the.. ah... mood to listen to those parts.. if you know what I mean.

 

Pleasant melody in the vocals.

 

Rick

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Agree with the above, interesting and somewhat different, and I also got bored during the instrumental parts. I would shorten them. Had a little trouble understanding the lyrics, but I like what you are going for with the vocals (atypical melody) although I agree that the tone as recorded could be improved a lot. I guess it sounds a bit whiny to me which I personally find annoying.

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