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Rather than start a new here is more work on a song


Mahuska

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First off I took Sticky's advice and wrote a chorus. Then Cubase crashed. I had my new lyrics on Windows notepad. It was lost too.

Rather than give in the towel I Started over forgetting much of what I had done

So here it is again

Lyrics

 

I wanted to kiss you and feel your mouth on mine

I don't care about the reasons

I don't care how much time

As you bit my lower lip

 

I squezzed your harder in my grip

and I squezzed you in my harder grip

 

I wanted to share all of my feelings

Do I dare and avoid embarrashmnet

But it is a chance to explore

But engagements took me elswhere

 

You were employed with an man with so many kids

Hard to leave his life after all those years

All alone all alone All alone all alone

 

 

I wanted to share all of my feelings

Do I dare and avoid embarrashmnet

But it is a chance to explore

But engagements took me elswhere

 

 

I looked up from a paper she was there

She had nixed her love we never shared

We are happy now We are happy now

And together

new recording, yes it is not considered done

 

SC

http://soundcloud.com/mahuska/i-want-to-kiss-3-with-lee-1

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FWIW, if you are working on the same song and the other thread isn't overly long, it is usually best to just add the new versions to that thread. Otherwise the board get bogged down.

 

Point taken. Learning the ropes here. I'll do so. Sorry

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