Members desiderium Posted February 12, 2006 Members Posted February 12, 2006 Right now I'm recording some demos for the guys that are going to be backing me, so I'm working hard at full arrangements. Guitar is a Dean Dao acoustic, and I'm using the piezo for the demos... will record it and the larrive for the album. http://www.mp3lizard.com/download.cfm?id=19409 Thanks for listening guys.
Members Cldplytkmn Posted February 12, 2006 Members Posted February 12, 2006 it was hard to hear the lyrics, so i can't really comment there... i did like the melody of it and all that. just to give honest opinion, its hard to concentrate on the song with those bad keyboard sounds in there... haha... even though i'm sure you just put them in for ideas for the backing guys... my only real critique would be that 6 minutes is kinda pushing it for a song like that... its a pretty straight-forward song without any modulation or any such stuff... i think if its possible (may not be possible with your lyrics), you could trim it down a bit... my take has just always been always leave a listener wanting more and not less.
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