Members CarlWagnerMusic Posted July 23, 2011 Members Share Posted July 23, 2011 Hello Harmony Central, its been AGES since i was here last, but I'm back with a vocal cover that I did early this morning. and i would appreciate some feedback on how it was and maybe my next song or if i should go back and redo a song i already did. THANKS! ~~Carl~~ VIDEO LINK: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DqzaNPNib_I&feature=channel_video_title Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jugulator Posted July 23, 2011 Members Share Posted July 23, 2011 Your singing isn't bad. But I'd like to hear more support. And could you sing something using your full voice? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members CarlWagnerMusic Posted July 23, 2011 Author Members Share Posted July 23, 2011 thanks for your feedback. and yeah i can next time i wont do a cover at 1:30 in the morning when peeps are asleep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Masklin Posted July 23, 2011 Members Share Posted July 23, 2011 You're off pitch a lot.Your tone is very breathy.Your high notes are strained and therefore lose clarity and timbre. Your voice sounds like it would have been very pleasant if you fixed these things :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members JohnBenussi Posted July 23, 2011 Members Share Posted July 23, 2011 You're off pitch a lot.Your tone is very breathy.Your high notes are strained and therefore lose clarity and timbre.Your voice sounds like it would have been very pleasant if you fixed these things :-) Spot on. I also detect that the OP's intentionally holding back. Was someone sleeping in the next room? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members CarlWagnerMusic Posted July 24, 2011 Author Members Share Posted July 24, 2011 Spot on. I also detect that the OP's intentionally holding back. Was someone sleeping in the next room? Yes. Thats why i had to sing softly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members beach1 Posted July 24, 2011 Members Share Posted July 24, 2011 You're off pitch a lot.Your tone is very breathy.Your high notes are strained and therefore lose clarity and timbre.Your voice sounds like it would have been very pleasant if you fixed these things :-) I also agree with this. I'm not exactly sure about the high notes being strained, but only because I can't always completely tell yet when notes are strained from just hearing it. Next time, like someone else said, try singing in a full voice. It will most likely sound a lot better if you do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cjpbarboza Posted July 24, 2011 Members Share Posted July 24, 2011 i agree with the others comments you are off of key several time but i like your head voice you need to improve how to combine your natural voice and your head voice, and work in your pitch good look friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members CarlWagnerMusic Posted July 26, 2011 Author Members Share Posted July 26, 2011 all the advice is greatly appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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