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Hello Harmony Central, its been AGES since i was here last, but I'm back with a vocal cover that I did early this morning. and i would appreciate some feedback on how it was and maybe my next song or if i should go back and redo a song i already did. THANKS! :D

 

~~Carl~~

 

VIDEO LINK: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DqzaNPNib_I&feature=channel_video_title

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You're off pitch a lot.

Your tone is very breathy.

Your high notes are strained and therefore lose clarity and timbre.


Your voice sounds like it would have been very pleasant if you fixed these things :-)

 

 

 

Spot on.

 

I also detect that the OP's intentionally holding back.

Was someone sleeping in the next room?

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You're off pitch a lot.

Your tone is very breathy.

Your high notes are strained and therefore lose clarity and timbre.


Your voice sounds like it would have been very pleasant if you fixed these things :-)

 

I also agree with this. I'm not exactly sure about the high notes being strained, but only because I can't always completely tell yet when notes are strained from just hearing it.

 

Next time, like someone else said, try singing in a full voice. It will most likely sound a lot better if you do that.

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