New lyrics/ Scream and Yell

[tony333]

So it's been a bit since I've written. I am a single line away before the tweaking begins. Still working on a melody. Open for any and all suggestions. Thanks.

 

Scream and Yell

 

Feels like I am drowning

Feet steady on the ground

Bee's are buzzing round my head

The whole world's pressing down

the whole world's pressing down

 

I know I should be breathing

But this air is full of lead

Trying to drag me to the bottom

Try to fill my heart with dread

Fill my heart with dread

 

 

So I scream

But no one hears

Echo through the halls of time

Like a slow parade of tears

 

So I yell

But no ones there

Blind eyes turning truth to lies

Leaving hope lost to despair

 

 

Our electric box is failing

Glowing faces in the dark

Words that hold no meaning

While clowns still play their part

The clowns still play their part

 

 

Sheep just keep on shuffling

Afraid to raise their eyes

Scared to death to break away

Scared to feel alive

Scared to feel alive

 

 

So they scream

But no one hears

Echos through the halls of time

Like a slow parade of tears

 

So they yell

But no one's there

Blind eyes turning truth to lies

Leaving hope lost to despair

 

 

 

Dreams just keep on dying

Falling off the vine

Still too gone to notice

Which are yours and which are mine

Which are yours and which are mine

 

 

So we scream

But no one hears

Echos through the halls of time

Like a slow parade of tears

 

So we yell

But no one's there

Blind eyes turning truth to lies

Leaving hope lost to despair

 

So I scream

But no one hears

Echo through the halls of time

Like a slownparadenof tears

 

So I yell

But no one's there

Blind eyes turning truth to lies

Leaving hope lost to despair

Hope lost to despair

Leaving hope lost to despair

[Delmont]

The line will fill itself in. Just start tweaking.

[tony333]

So it's been a bit since I've written. I am a single line away before the tweaking begins. Still working on a melody. Open for any and all suggestions. Thanks.

 

Scream and Yell

 

Feels like I am drowning

Feet steady on the ground

Bee's are buzzing round my head

The whole world's pressing down

the whole world's pressing down

 

I know I should be breathing

But this air is full of lead

Trying to drag me to the bottom

Try to fill my heart with dread

Fill my heart with dread

 

 

So I scream

But no one hears

Echo through the halls of time

Like a slow parade of tears

 

So I yell

But no ones there

Blind eyes turning truth to lies

Leaving hope lost to despair

 

 

Our electric box is failing

Glowing faces in the dark

Words that hold no meaning

While clowns still play their part

The clowns still play their part

 

 

Sheep just keep on shuffling

Afraid to raise their eyes

Scared to death to break away

Scared to feel alive

Scared to feel alive

 

 

So they scream

But no one hears

Echos through the halls of time

Like a slow parade of tears

 

So they yell

But no one's there

Blind eyes turning truth to lies

Leaving hope lost to despair

 

 

 

Dreams continue dying

Falling off the vine

Still too gone to notice

Which are yours and which are mine

Which are yours and which are mine

 

 

So we scream

But no one hears

Echos through the halls of time

Like a slow parade of tears

 

So we yell

But no one's there

Blind eyes turning truth to lies

Leaving hope lost to despair

 

So I scream

But no one hears

Echo through the halls of time

Like a slow parrade of tears

 

So I yell

But no one's there

Blind eyes turning truth to lies

Leaving hope lost to despair

Hope lost to despair

Leaving hope lost to despair

 

First tweak done. Pretty happy with it. Just have to make sure it "sings" now.