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Rough Demo (kinda weird pop)


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Hello folks

 

Long time since i've been here

 

So I had this idea for a pop song that just came from nowhere, took 10 mins to write and a quick rough track demo.

 

I don't even think I like it but it's so different to what I do that I don't know

 

Any thoughts?

 

https://soundcloud.com/stickboy/freaky-love-demo

 

Freaky Love.

 

When you need something more

just stay outside of this room

I've already given my all

There's nothing more for you

 

But still you take it so badly

Don't you know I need you so madly

I do.

Too many secrets, too many mistakes

But you are my weakness

You're already puttin' me out

You're already puttin' me out

 

You say you'll come to my room

I've seen so many of you

I'm pulling out, you're putting in

Wherever I go, I dunno

It's kinda funny

but it's something to show how I feel

 

Don't you know how I feel

I'm feeling kind of wierd

 

Freaky love don't put me under covers

No your freaky love won't put me under covers

You're always tryin to pull me under your covers

But I don't do freaky love

No I don't do freaky love

 

I don't want your freaky love

I don't want your freaky love

​​​​​​​I don't want your freaky love

​​​​​​​I don't want your freaky love

 

 

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Nice, the only thing I would do is hit em with the chorus earlier.

 

Love your stuff, by the way

 

 

Freaky Love.

 

Verse 1

When you need something more

just stay outside of this room

I've already given my all

There's nothing more for you

 

Verse2 w/ heart beat drum thing)

But still you take it so badly

Don't you know I need you so madly

I do.

Too many secrets, too many mistakes

But you are my weakness

You're already puttin' me out

You're already puttin' me out

 

1st Chorus

Freaky love don't put me under covers

No your freaky love won't put me under covers

You're always tryin to pull me under your covers

But I don't do freaky love

No I don't do freaky love

 

Verse 3

You say you'll come to my room

I've seen so many of you

I'm pulling out, you're putting in

Wherever I go, I dunno

It's kinda funny

but it's something to show how I feel

 

Don't you know how I feel

I'm feeling kind of weird

 

2nd chorus

Freaky love don't put me under covers

No your freaky love won't put me under covers

You're always tryin to pull me under your covers

But I don't do freaky love

No I don't do freaky love

 

I don't want your freaky love

I don't want your freaky love

​​​​​​​I don't want your freaky love

​​​​​​​I don't want your freaky love

 

 

 

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Cheers dude

 

Yeh.....i certainly considered doing the chorus earlier.....but then I thought IF i record it properly maybe more of a build in music will carry it til the chorus at the end.....its just over a simple 3 chord progression with little else at the moment

 

Having said that.....you're probably right

 

 

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Welcome back Stickboy! How you been? Haven't you seen you here in a long while.

 

I'm liking the vibe of this song, even the autotuned vocals. Light arrangement but suits it well. Definitely another Stickboy classic. lol

 

Nothing really to add except that I feel like the chorus needs more energy or something to lift off from the verse.

 

Anyway, cool to hear from you again. Hope to here more songs from you. Cheers.

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