Members stickboymusic Posted August 28, 2018 Members Share Posted August 28, 2018 Hello folks Long time since i've been here So I had this idea for a pop song that just came from nowhere, took 10 mins to write and a quick rough track demo. I don't even think I like it but it's so different to what I do that I don't know Any thoughts? https://soundcloud.com/stickboy/freaky-love-demo Freaky Love. When you need something morejust stay outside of this roomI've already given my allThere's nothing more for you But still you take it so badlyDon't you know I need you so madlyI do.Too many secrets, too many mistakesBut you are my weaknessYou're already puttin' me outYou're already puttin' me out You say you'll come to my roomI've seen so many of youI'm pulling out, you're putting inWherever I go, I dunnoIt's kinda funnybut it's something to show how I feel Don't you know how I feelI'm feeling kind of wierd Freaky love don't put me under coversNo your freaky love won't put me under coversYou're always tryin to pull me under your coversBut I don't do freaky loveNo I don't do freaky love I don't want your freaky loveI don't want your freaky loveI don't want your freaky loveI don't want your freaky love Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Mikeo Posted September 2, 2018 Members Share Posted September 2, 2018 Nice, the only thing I would do is hit em with the chorus earlier. Love your stuff, by the way Freaky Love. Verse 1When you need something morejust stay outside of this roomI've already given my allThere's nothing more for you Verse2 w/ heart beat drum thing)But still you take it so badlyDon't you know I need you so madlyI do.Too many secrets, too many mistakesBut you are my weaknessYou're already puttin' me outYou're already puttin' me out 1st ChorusFreaky love don't put me under coversNo your freaky love won't put me under coversYou're always tryin to pull me under your coversBut I don't do freaky loveNo I don't do freaky love Verse 3You say you'll come to my roomI've seen so many of youI'm pulling out, you're putting inWherever I go, I dunnoIt's kinda funnybut it's something to show how I feel Don't you know how I feelI'm feeling kind of weird 2nd chorusFreaky love don't put me under coversNo your freaky love won't put me under coversYou're always tryin to pull me under your coversBut I don't do freaky loveNo I don't do freaky love I don't want your freaky loveI don't want your freaky loveI don't want your freaky loveI don't want your freaky love Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted September 3, 2018 Author Members Share Posted September 3, 2018 Cheers dude Yeh.....i certainly considered doing the chorus earlier.....but then I thought IF i record it properly maybe more of a build in music will carry it til the chorus at the end.....its just over a simple 3 chord progression with little else at the moment Having said that.....you're probably right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators davie Posted September 12, 2018 Moderators Share Posted September 12, 2018 Welcome back Stickboy! How you been? Haven't you seen you here in a long while. I'm liking the vibe of this song, even the autotuned vocals. Light arrangement but suits it well. Definitely another Stickboy classic. lol Nothing really to add except that I feel like the chorus needs more energy or something to lift off from the verse. Anyway, cool to hear from you again. Hope to here more songs from you. Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rickidoo Posted September 25, 2018 Members Share Posted September 25, 2018 Love the melancholy organ. Sadness conveyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members blue2blue Posted September 28, 2018 Members Share Posted September 28, 2018 Do you slip into a Scots accent in the chorus? Freaky loaf? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted September 29, 2018 Author Members Share Posted September 29, 2018 Do you slip into a Scots accent in the chorus? Freaky loaf? Are you still here Ha I think it's just my northerness coming through (LUV) Hope all is good sir Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members blue2blue Posted March 5, 2019 Members Share Posted March 5, 2019 Are you still here Ha I think it's just my northerness coming through (LUV) Hope all is good sir Just movin' a little slower, is all... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members tony333 Posted March 7, 2019 Members Share Posted March 7, 2019 As always very well done. The only thing I would add is that when I read it before listening, it "played" at a much faster tempo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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