Members SilverBeat Posted April 18, 2017 Members Share Posted April 18, 2017 My newest completion is "I Can't Jump". I used one of the episodes from the tv show "Cheers", as the blue print for this one. It has nothing to do with a problem of mine. First there's the shock Than There's pain Than there's the ping pong blame I shared my side She said I'm right Still I sleep alone at night And Every night is long without her And the reasons that she gone is just a blur Chorus I'm so bloody sad But I can't jump I've lost all I had But I can't jump Every thing gone wrong, yeah it's all bad I'm so bloody sad But I can't jump I lost my joy Lost my sun I lost her way of fun She filled my need She made my day She left me wishing shed stay And every day is dull without her And the reasons that she gone is just a blur Repeat chorus My whole world's been so much duller Since she's been gone my life been smaller I've been such a mess, but I can't jump Album Just A Fan - https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/just-a-fan/id1145579818 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Matthias Hornstein Posted September 2, 2017 Members Share Posted September 2, 2017 Nice lyrics! Looking forward to hear more of your music in the future Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Winry Ember Posted September 19, 2017 Members Share Posted September 19, 2017 I like the lyrics, thanks for posting! I love that phrase "ping-pong blame". I think the song would be stronger if the second verse moved the story along somehow, though, instead of repeating the same information with different words. Maybe something more about how she left, or what's keeping you from jumping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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