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Mosquito Farm Blues [updated with Demo!]


rhino55

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EDIT: Here's where it stands now with demo. Performance aside, is the bridge working?

 

http://www.soundclick.com/player/sin...=13178009&q=hi

 

 

V1:

I got this buzzing in my ear

Won't leave me alone

Slap the side of my head

Won't leave me alone

I spend all day long

Down on a mosquito farm

 

V2:

Wrists and ankles on fire

Won't leave me alone

Fed by tall tall grass

Won't leave me alone

I spend all day long

Down on a mosquito farm

 

Bridge:

Rained so much it gave me fits

I thought that was as bad as it gets

Soil washed away, the rain finally quit

I got no plants and a powerful itch

 

V3:

I sprayed my arms, sprayed my neck

Won't leave me alone

Lord knows I'm such a wreck

Won't leave me alone

I spend all my time

Down on a mosquito farm

 

 

 

 

 

OP:

 

This is what I got for the challenge so far. How's it working? Any ideas for another verse?

 

V1:

I got this buzzing in my ear

It won't leave me alone

Slap the side of my head

It won't leave me alone

I spend all day long

Down on a mosquito farm

 

V2:

Wrists and ankles on fire

They won't leave me alone

Fed by tall tall grass

They won't leave me alone

I spend all day long

Down on a mosquito farm

 

Bridge:

It's getting so bad it's giving me fits

I wish I knew this was as bad as it gets

Soil's too soggy and the rain won't quit

I got no plants and a powerful itch

 

I spend all day long

Down on a mosquito farm

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I love the title.

 

And, yeah, I think it could use one more verse.

 

Maybe something about failed techniques to keep the critters at bay?

 

I sprayed my arms, I sprayed my neck.

They won't leave me alone.

I'm a [something] total wreck

They won't leave me alone.

 

I don't understand "I got no plants..." though.

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