Members ekikoo Posted March 13, 2012 Members Share Posted March 13, 2012 G'day..! www.youtube.com/watch?v=i3bjrpm-A34& So i made this one song last fall but just recently bothered do write 'some' lyrics and asked a friend of mine to perform a little something. I thought i'd play a bass track for the video too... It's pretty much done, at first it didn't have that much "dynamics" during verses etc... But let me hear what you think, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rickidoo Posted March 13, 2012 Members Share Posted March 13, 2012 Polished song. Love the bass and bass lines and playing. The vocals are a bit of a strain to understand, so am not sure of the lyrics and what the message of the song is. They need to stand out a touch more. Musically, I think the song groove is terrific. Rick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ekikoo Posted March 13, 2012 Author Members Share Posted March 13, 2012 Honestly it was my biggest trouble to write the text (it HAD to be me!!! ) It doesn't really explain a story, though now looking at it, it could be thoughts of anybody ordinary guy/gal, dunno... Not being a native speaker, you try to make the grammar work, but is that 'that' necessary when writing poems/lyrics? Thanks! edit: oh you meant like pronouncing and mixing-wise? Let us work on that in the future! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members oldgitplayer Posted March 13, 2012 Members Share Posted March 13, 2012 Terrific song - great playing, singing and energy.I know they're different songs, but I straight away listened to Mike Oldfield's 'Moonlight Shadow' that I haven't heard for years.They are of a similar genre with female vocal and great lead guitar playing.Also you play a good bass there young man. I trust you will keep writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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