Members rsadasiv Posted June 5, 2013 Members Share Posted June 5, 2013 It's too dead in here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rsadasiv Posted June 5, 2013 Author Members Share Posted June 5, 2013 I always thoughtHe was kind of callowBut after she diedAnd he raised those two kidsI realized it was me who was shallow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rsadasiv Posted June 5, 2013 Author Members Share Posted June 5, 2013 Meh. How about a Raspberries type thing? You made me wait so longWith all your carrying onBut I had to have you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted June 5, 2013 Moderators Share Posted June 5, 2013 rsadasiv wrote: I always thought He was kind of callow But after she died And he raised those two kids I realized it was me who was shallow I always thoughtHe was kind of callowBut after she diedAnd he raised those two kidsI realized it was me who was shallow Then there's old PeteDrinking one gallon GalloEveryday on his porchBut he's still burning her torchAnd I realize it was me who was shallow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted June 6, 2013 Moderators Share Posted June 6, 2013 Wow. i think that's pretty cool. I love for you taken it. I want to mess with what you've got a little bit if that's okay but I'm really liking this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted June 13, 2013 Moderators Share Posted June 13, 2013 So... I started working this up. I've mangled the form a little in that instead of 2 verse sections before the bridge/chorus (I'm calling it the bridge) it goes to an intro again and then 3rd section of the 1st verse. Currently we have IntroV1aV1bBridgeV2a... But I've got IntroV1aV1bRe-introV1cBridgeV2a... Care to take a swing at that V1c? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Members rsadasiv Posted June 13, 2013 Author Members Share Posted June 13, 2013 Lee Knight wrote: So... I started working this up. I've mangled the form a little in that instead of 2 verse sections before the bridge/chorus (I'm calling it the bridge) it goes to an intro again and then 3rd section of the 1st verse. Currently we have Intro V1a V1b Bridge V2a... But I've got Intro V1a V1b Re-intro V1c Bridge V2a... Care to take a swing at that V1c? Can you update the lyric markers with this structure? (original below) V1.You made me wait so longWith all your carrying onBut I had to have you I couldn't be that strongTo be your tag alongStill I had to have you C1.That nightDid it feel rightOr was just a flightOf my imagination?You knowThat I would stand and fightIf it just mightGet me your invitation V2.You had me on the phoneTryin' to hold my ownBut I just had to have you Did I play the foolDid I lose my coolCause I just had to have you? C2.That nightDid it feel rightOr was just a flightOf my imagination?You knowThat I would stand and fightIf it just mightGet me your invitation B.Walk you down the avenueIt's all I could do and I think that you knewThat I just had to have you C3.That nightDid it feel rightOr was just a flightOf my imagination?You knowThat I would stand and fightIf it just mightGet me your invitation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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