Members oldgitplayer Posted June 11, 2013 Members Share Posted June 11, 2013 So what's been the news headlines over your way these past few days? Ours has been interesting enough for a song to start to form:(Just the beginning of the idea) + a bit added The Naughty States of America VerseCan't you seeWe have the rightTo know all that you doI spy with my little eyeSomething beginning with - YOUGoo goo ga joob ChorusSo have no fear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rsadasiv Posted June 11, 2013 Members Share Posted June 11, 2013 **** the Patriot Axt in its **** face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted June 11, 2013 Members Share Posted June 11, 2013 oldgitplayer wrote: So what's been the news headlines over your way these past few days? Ours has been interesting enough for a song to start to form:(Just the beginning of the idea) The Naughty States of AmericaVerseCan't you seeWe have the right To know all that you doI spy with my little eyeSomething beginning with - YOUGoo goo ga joob ChorusSo have no fear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members oldgitplayer Posted June 11, 2013 Author Members Share Posted June 11, 2013 LCK wrote: Good 'un. Shouldn't it be the "You naughty states of America," though? I'll see how the thinking evolves.At the moment we talk about the NSA and the USA and I also like the double meaning of Naughty States (capital S) and naughty states (small s).But I'll let your idea filter in - it needs to seep through the rocks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted June 11, 2013 Moderators Share Posted June 11, 2013 Great lyric. Nicely done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members oldgitplayer Posted June 11, 2013 Author Members Share Posted June 11, 2013 Thanks for the feedback guys and dolls (there has to be a songwriting Transvestite among us surely?)However - I'm not feeling this one, so I won't be taking it any further. I've become more ruthless with my work nowadays. I'm a prolific writer of lyrics (a couple of songs a week at least), but there's no point in putting in the next hard yards if you're not feeling the song.So it's easier for me to just keep writing them, and only develop the select few that do something for me. Especially because my music output is only about 25% of my lyric output.Who else has this problem - write a lyric, but don't feel it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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