Members LCK Posted June 6, 2013 Members Share Posted June 6, 2013 Here's the "finished" version of the tune, with a new title. The vocal still needs a little work (I'm singing it in Bb instead of A). Of course any complaints, kudos, or suggestions are welcome. "Someone New"(4:27) V.1When I awakeand you are thereit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted June 6, 2013 Members Share Posted June 6, 2013 Its classic LCK - very good I personally think you should change the rhyme scheme on the bridge Bridge 1And it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted June 6, 2013 Author Members Share Posted June 6, 2013 stickboymusic wrote: Its classic LCK - very goodBridge 1 And it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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