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rsadasiv

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fondly... :)

 

I'm walking the streets of Manhattan

In the rain

Taking pictures of street scenes and people

In the rain

And I'm thinking of you

And where you've gone to

And the things that you do

That make me feel blue

I'm walking the streets of Manhattan

In the rain

 

People are strange but a dog will always

Be your friend

They speak in a language that anyone

Can understand

And I'm thinking of you

And where you've gone to

And the things that you do

That make me feel blue

People are strange but a dog will always

Be your friend

 

In the cafe I start feeling old

The breeze from the street brings a shivering cold

The piles of books that are sitting unsold

The coffee that comes out too bitter and bold

 

So I'm walking the streets of Manhattan

In the rain

Yes I'm walking the streets of Manhattan

In the rain

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rsadasiv wrote:

fondly...
:)

 

I'm walking the streets of Manhattan

In the rain

Taking pictures of street scenes and people

In the rain ...

I love it. Thanks! That's me to a Tee...

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Comprehend for understand. Rhymes better with friend.

 

"What they feel is easy to comprehend."

"They're not too hard to comprehend."

"They're always easy to comprehend." 

. . . , or something  like that. 

(maybe start with comprehend and come back with "be your friend." . . . , just a thought )

 

 

 

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Fantastic.  The only issue I had was the purposeful grammatical error just to get a rhyme:

And where you've gone to

Fixing it would probably require an altogether new line there.

When I first read the lyric, I thought something had happened to LCK.  But then I was relieved to see him commenting just below!  :smileyhappy:

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Monkey Uncle wrote:

Fantastic.  The only issue I had was the purposeful grammatical error just to get a rhyme:

And where you've gone to

Fixing it would probably require an altogether new line there.

When I first read the lyric, I thought something had happened to LCK.  But then I was relieved to see him commenting just below! 
:smileyhappy:

I like that phrase.

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