04-14-2013 07:55 AM
Maybe this was on purpose, and if so, then I apologize. There were times in the song that the emotion was so strong that it made the vocal off pitch and uncontrolled. Whenever you're adding extreme sadness, it's important to control your breathing, because it's in those moments when you lose vocal control.
The song has lots of emotion, and there's a good lyric.
04-16-2013 04:39 PM
Some of it sounded really nice. But it seemed to lack true emotion, as if you sang the lyrics with fake emotions yet weren't really feeling/thinking about the lyrics you were singing.