Hey there! You have potential, but you're flat on the higher notes and sharp on the lower notes. You should listen to the original song again, and see whether you can hear where you've gone wrong on your recording. If you can - that's great! Keep practicing and trying to make your voice match the right notes. If you can't hear where you've gone wrong, find the sheet music online and play it on the piano (or any other instrument). You don't have to be able to play the instrument well, just play the notes of the melody and sing along with them. It's a great way to find the pitch if you're struggling.
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