03-20-2013 09:23 AM - edited 03-20-2013 09:24 AM
This a great interpretation! I like that you went into more of a head voice for the chorus to make it softer. However, you need to make sure you have enough breath support. Just because it's softer doesn't mean you don't need some power behind it, especially for those higher notes. I think that was the reason you went a tiny bit flat in the first chorus. Otherwise it was excellent!
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