04-12-2012 06:42 PM
04-13-2012 02:14 AM
04-13-2012 05:32 AM
This has some good bits..... vocally you seemed to really find your groove AND voice in that end section .... almost going a little bowie-esque
If you could somehow get yourself into that place for the whole song it would be a big improvement
I like it as an idea
If possible... could you take a bit more time writing your lyrics on here, a lot of mistakes made it hard to follow
04-13-2012 06:01 AM
04-13-2012 07:57 AM
04-13-2012 12:11 PM
04-13-2012 12:15 PM
Thanks a lot you guys. I value your input. LCK I usually just play and jot down song ideas, some sort of lyric or meaning. I went back and forth with "endear and endure, honestly lost in the moment as recording in Computer Daw has it pitfalls, I messed up. I didn't want to lose it as I can't read Music and use my ears. Not but only a few songs were "developed" from the lyrics first. It would really be cool and help me to have another person/musician
while this occurs, but I don't have that. I use this forum as an alternative to grow as I really want too.
Oswlek I too will take your suggestions and will try and employ them this weekend.
I am sorry that I may share songs or ideas in such a primitive way. Thanks for your patience.
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