04-18-2012 12:13 PM
04-18-2012 12:17 PM
04-18-2012 02:10 PM
I have a hard time figuring out what you're saying, both in your lyrics and in your posts. But this song has a solid guitar hook that stuck in my mind long after I listened to it. In other words, this is a strong start of something that could be really great. So, Mahuska, do you read people's comments? Do you want to refine your lyrics? What do you wanna do? LCK
I wanted to a The Beatles "Revolution" but thought a bad idea. This one may be too. I Wonder if this is anything to scrap from it. I wanted to do Electrics Guitars Come in with a a bold beginning. The idea is so immature. I don't have much causes's to enlist in Lyrics(so far) Bring out the big guns shows us what you have You brought out the masses they have left Long gone, Change of a Policy that can's be written or sold it fills no ears People fed up up with all those lies There's no dequise to hide from within SC url http://soundcloud.com/mahuska/resist
04-18-2012 02:29 PM
04-18-2012 04:31 PM
Cool. So let's start with the title: what does "Resit" mean? Did you mean "Resist?" LCK
To answer all the above. I thought this forum as a breeding ground for ideas. Some songs polished and some with a hook or idea. What stage to you begin to share. And Yes LCK I want to develop my lyrics. I do listen as there is so much talent here
04-18-2012 06:19 PM
04-18-2012 07:27 PM
Okay, so it helps us give you feedback if we can decipher what you've written. I think there are a lot of us here who like what you're doing musically, but find some of the things you've written a bit puzzling. Please help us out! Thanks, man! LCK
04-19-2012 07:47 AM
04-19-2012 08:13 AM
I think the first step here is for you to take time in your communications. Slow down, double check your typing, be clear. We're not being picky. Understand that it is IMPOSSIBLE to comment on a lyric full of typos. And it has the distracting element of suggesting you don't care. Then, as Stick pointed out, why not try out some of the ideas suggested. Respond to those offering suggestions. Cause I must admit... ...I'd given up responding to your posts for much the same reasons Stick brings up. I started thinking you were just posting them to display them. I'd love to help out too, and I'm happy to understand now that you're genuine in your desire to work on this stuff. Cool.
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