RevRomansky

Randooser- Great riffing. I'd open up the sound by putting two amp sounds on the same guitar, juxtaposed right and left, and a VERY background long delay. Additionally, work the closed/half-closed hi-hat a little more instead of straight open cymbals. Couldn't hear the bass on my laptop, pump higher frequencies on it so you can hear it on a cheesy little speaker/ a cheesy speaker should be your final mix BTW. If you had no bass and were going for a guitar-only sound, pump up the guitar frequencies on the bass end so you can hear THEM on a cheesy speaker. Great concept, just a little sprucing up is all you need. It's mostly post-production from here on in.

Here's one I kinda like, have at it.