Members travisbrowning Posted April 11, 2013 Members Share Posted April 11, 2013 https://soundcloud.com/travisbrowning-1/hell-on-wheels-unfinished hope u liek Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Urinate Forever Posted April 11, 2013 Members Share Posted April 11, 2013 The chorus was great. Don't change a thing on that. My main beef with is that the verse sounds like mush. The bass is okay but the rhythm chords don't sit well in the mix, sounds mushy to me. The other issue was when you went from the chorus to the verse again. It was assaulting on my ears, caused negative stimuli while i was listening, aint nobody got time fo dat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members eti313 Posted April 11, 2013 Members Share Posted April 11, 2013 Sounds good! I think the problem Ash has with the verses is that the vocals and guitars are fighting for the same harmonic range in the verses, not so in the choruses where the guitar tone is more mellow. Maybe Phil could advise better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members BrentMpls Posted April 13, 2013 Members Share Posted April 13, 2013 I can't hear or understand the vocals. But the music was fun, I enjoyed that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Urinate Forever Posted April 13, 2013 Members Share Posted April 13, 2013 I hate anthony green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members travisbrowning Posted April 14, 2013 Author Members Share Posted April 14, 2013 BrentMpls wrote: I can't hear or understand the vocals. But the music was fun, I enjoyed that Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members TomCTC Posted April 14, 2013 Members Share Posted April 14, 2013 Sent from his iPhone, guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members GuitarSlim101 Posted April 15, 2013 Members Share Posted April 15, 2013 Sounds good. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members travisbrowning Posted April 15, 2013 Author Members Share Posted April 15, 2013 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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