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  • Heres a really rough unfinished mix of what I've been working on.

    https://soundcloud.com/travisbrowning-1/hell-on-wheels-unfinished

     

     

    hope u liek

    http://lazarusband.bandcamp.com/

  • #2
    The chorus was great. Don't change a thing on that.

    My main beef with is that the verse sounds like mush. The bass is okay but the rhythm chords don't sit well in the mix, sounds mushy to me.

    The other issue was when you went from the chorus to the verse again. It was assaulting on my ears, caused negative stimuli while i was listening, aint nobody got time fo dat

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    • eti313
      eti313 commented
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      Sounds good! I think the problem Ash has with the verses is that the vocals and guitars are fighting for the same harmonic range in the verses, not so in the choruses where the guitar tone is more mellow. Maybe Phil could advise better.


  • #3

    I can't hear or understand the vocals. 

    But the music was fun, .png" alt=":smileyhappy:" title="Smiley Happy" /> I enjoyed that

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    • Urinate Forever
      Urinate Forever commented
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      I hate anthony green.

    • travisbrowning
      travisbrowning commented
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      BrentMpls wrote:

      I can't hear or understand the vocals. 

      But the music was fun, .png" alt=":smileyhappy:" title="Smiley Happy" /> I enjoyed that


      Thank you


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    • #5
      Sounds good. Nice work.

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