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    Call Back The Missiles" last song for 2017.

    I wrote this song with a presidential term in mind. The chorus was written around the fact that the president thought that missiles could be called back. He had to be told that we could not call back the Missiles. "The President incorrectly asserted that ''submarine ballistic missiles are recallable''. This song was written for it's historic value. It doesn't hold any political view of mine at all.

    https://www.reverbnation.com/silverb...k-the-missiles

    Happy New Year!!!


    Lyric
    I can tell you stories - of American Patriots
    Going down in flames of glory
    Unseen in the likes of soviets
    Yeah we've got the fight and the spirit
    We fly old red white and blue
    Broad stripes and stars for merit
    We've yet to show all we can do
    Chorus
    Call back the missiles
    Their course is a mistake
    Call back the missiles
    Lets do another take
    I can make things better - with economist remedies
    Living on our strength as debtors
    Building arms to break our enemies
    Yeah I've got a plan some call voodoo
    And Some call it by my name
    Got a plan just right for you
    And it fits right in to the game
    Repeat chorus
    Lets get the gummit of our back
    It's just a pest and that's a fact
    Lets get back to business and break up the bureaucracy
    Repeat chorus
    And Some times when you go to sleep
    You can go to sleep
    Knowing, every things gonna be alright

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    Clever idea & title. I'd let a really good writer tighten up the lyrics.
    "Call back the missiles" is a fun intro to the title verse (or refrain).

    But I don't think "Their course is a mistake" measures up to that first line.

    "We made a small mistake" or variations of that would be stronger IMO.

    Ditto for: "I can make things better - with economist remedies"

    So it goes throughout the song. You could have a real hit there if you tighten the lyric.
    Last edited by Etienne Rambert; 01-15-2018, 07:23 PM.
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