Members Enaillid Posted March 22, 2013 Members Share Posted March 22, 2013 Hi! This is an abridged version of Gotye's song "Somebody That I Used To Know" featuring Kimbra sung by yours truly. Please give me any constructive criticism you can think of! Thank you so much [deleted] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members string1 Posted March 22, 2013 Members Share Posted March 22, 2013 First of all: Smile more while sing and avoid kind of bad faces or wrinkles. You were in nice middle voice with some force and tension, you are forming your voice with vocal chords so keep most koncentration to duty of vocal chords not the forehead. Part at the end was nice and smoothe Evaluation from my side: Good with a lot of potencial for excellent Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ido1957 Posted March 22, 2013 Members Share Posted March 22, 2013 That was outstanding, great pitch, control and you did the long phrases without any apparent effort. And you did it all using a webcam. No headphones or monitors. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators davie Posted March 24, 2013 Moderators Share Posted March 24, 2013 Beautifully sung! Just get a better mic and camera and you're all set! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Enaillid Posted March 24, 2013 Author Members Share Posted March 24, 2013 string1 - You're right about the facial expressions; too much brow creasing and furrowing! I have tried singing without doing so after reading your comment. It was difficult at first, but I think with practice I'll be able to do it with less effort. Thanks for the tips! ido1957, staticsound, and davie - Thank you so much for your encouragement! It really means alot to me, and motivates me to keep singing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members partlycloudy Posted March 25, 2013 Members Share Posted March 25, 2013 Agree with the others - that was great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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