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Youtube vid for my latest single "American Made"


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i like the chorus a lot as they're melodic and catchy

 

the verses are WAY too 80s and kinda sucky bro. i almost didn't make it to the chorus because the verse was a real turnoff

 

keep the break, solo and choruses, but rewrite the choruses to be less of a second-rate 80s one-hit wonder

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the verses are WAY too 80s and kinda sucky bro. i almost didn't make it to the chorus because the verse was a real turnoff

 

 

LOL What sounds "80s" to you? Is it the vocals, the guitar, both? I don't give any thought to what era or genre my music fits into while I make it, but I was born in 1980, so the sounds of the 80's are certainly a part of my psyche.

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I like the song but having heard your whole CD a couple of times I must say you can write awesome ballads, better than full fledge rock tunes. You should try to sell some of your ballads to producers, you would make a killing.

 

Love your work dude.

 

Rod

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Hey Rod! That's really nice of you say about my ballads, thanks a lot! My wife has been telling me to focus on the ballads for years :-). I guess I'll have to get working on some more ballads! Thanks again for the kinds words :-)

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