Members m26uk Posted April 17, 2011 Members Share Posted April 17, 2011 hey guys.. really like this song.. so i thought I would cover it.. hope you enjoy it..have a great day [video=youtube;3kJQEFhzW_M]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3kJQEFhzW_M Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators davie Posted April 17, 2011 Moderators Share Posted April 17, 2011 ooh nice Bruno Mars is actually heavily-influenced by MJ as well. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members YeahDoIt Posted April 17, 2011 Members Share Posted April 17, 2011 Very nice. You sing well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members jvardon Posted April 17, 2011 Members Share Posted April 17, 2011 You need to lighten up on the high notes. Too strained and overall quite nasal. Some of those notes were supposed to be in head voice and would have been less strained if you had attempted them that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members m26uk Posted April 18, 2011 Author Members Share Posted April 18, 2011 thanks guys.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cjpbarboza Posted May 16, 2011 Members Share Posted May 16, 2011 wow unexpectec i was waiting a dark voice but you sound very nice, yes something a little nasal and somethimes you sound a little weak, but i still like your voice if you work you can be a great sing good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members singergirl246 Posted June 24, 2011 Members Share Posted June 24, 2011 Sounds good for the type of sound you have. Not my cup of tea though, but still alright. I'm more of a darker sound type person. I would advise you to put more focus on diaphragmatic breathing and try to sing from deep within. That would help make your sound a lot less weak. Because it really does sound like your vocal focus is coming from the throat, which is never a good thing. Also you tend to go very flat in places, and I noticed the corners of your mouth go very wide. For more pitch control, make the corners of your mouth a little more rounder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members MikeyParent Posted June 24, 2011 Members Share Posted June 24, 2011 Also you tend to go very flat in places When exactly was that? What times? I never noticed anything particularly egregious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members singergirl246 Posted June 24, 2011 Members Share Posted June 24, 2011 First verse was good, "trash" was flat. Like I said just make the corners rounder. And "Ya" is terribly flat in the chours. "Pain", "Brain" "No, No, No" That's just a couple of spots. Go back and listen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members MikeyParent Posted June 24, 2011 Members Share Posted June 24, 2011 I guess we have different ideas of *terribly* flat ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members singergirl246 Posted June 24, 2011 Members Share Posted June 24, 2011 haha I guess so. I just know that when he hits those spots he goes under the pitch which my vocal coach has drilled in my over and over again to be able to hear. Then again maybe I'm just a "Pitch Nazi" lol And that's probably why I can't stand the new current "pop" music. But I never said it wasn't good. He's very good, just from a technical stand point he needs work. It will give him a better sound, more supported, help him stay on pitch and by not focusing so much on the throat and help prevent sores on his vocal chords which can show up later from using them wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jersey Jack Posted June 24, 2011 Members Share Posted June 24, 2011 I guess we have different ideas of *terribly* flat ;-) Wow, right about that! I'm guessing that Michael Jackson himself would be deemed flat by these standards. (Or Bruno, as the case may be.) But to be fair this style of singing does demand pitch perfect performances--which is why I don't much like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members singergirl246 Posted June 24, 2011 Members Share Posted June 24, 2011 I never said anything about the style being flat. You can still sing that way and use a better technique and still get the same results. Which is the difference between professionals like MJ and Novice performers. But yes, because of the way the style sounds, it's even more demanding to have good pitch and tone because if it doesn't, it is not pleasing to the ears at all. Example: Bruno Mars during live performance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members JohnBenussi Posted June 24, 2011 Members Share Posted June 24, 2011 I didn't know Michael Jackson sang Bruno Mars tunes!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members JohnBenussi Posted June 24, 2011 Members Share Posted June 24, 2011 I'd like you to sing some colour me badd.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members singergirl246 Posted June 24, 2011 Members Share Posted June 24, 2011 I didn't know Michael Jackson sang Bruno Mars tunes!!!!!! No, but people were implying that they have the same sounding style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rodclement Posted June 24, 2011 Members Share Posted June 24, 2011 I like it, for that type of singing it is spot on. I am not a big fan of the style but you pull it off very well and sound authentic. Rod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members MephistoE Posted June 26, 2011 Members Share Posted June 26, 2011 I think he was calling our friend in the video Michael Jackson, because we always hear him do MJ tunes really well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members OpiateGW Posted July 5, 2011 Members Share Posted July 5, 2011 Really good job man. Way out of my range =) Pitchy in a couple places but aside from that it sounded spot on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members m26uk Posted July 8, 2011 Author Members Share Posted July 8, 2011 thanks guys for your feedback, I appreciate you guys watching my vids and giving me constructive feedback, this song was definitley a tough one for me.. I find bruno mars songs tough. I guess with singing you never stop learning and you guys give me some good tips etc...anyway have a great day and thank you again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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