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jtv612

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21/M Hi! So I've never had vocal lessons or anything but I just like to sing. I love constructive criticism and any advice, my feelings don't get hurt easily so it would be helpful if you can be honest! Recorded on my phone, so sorry about the quality.

 

https://soundcloud.com/jtv612/v2-1

 

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Sounds good to me -- tone appropriate, pitch good. Recording noise almost got in the way.

 

Just the tiniest bit nasal to my ears. and the very last two words sounded a bit forced.

 

In terms of technique, I can't identify anything that seems to be wrong. Breathing sounds fine.

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Pitch is good and your voice has a pleasant timbre, you are singing with a very breathy tone though so there's no power when you get to certain words especially that final one.

 

I think if trained you could become a good singer but you need to learn to get rid of that breathy tone first

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