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Vocal critique needed and much appreciated


bluesguy63

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I checked out both versions, in the first version (the lower one) the pitch was better. In the second version the pitch had the tendency to be off, but the energy was better. If your objective is to sing the higher key then I would recommend practicing the higher key instead of the lower key version. I felt that the lower version might be bordering on too low.

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I checked out both versions, in the first version (the lower one) the pitch was better. In the second version the pitch had the tendency to be off, but the energy was better.QUOTE

 

If you can put the energy of the second one with the feeling of the first one, I think we'd have a winner. Your overall vocal tone was much better in the lower version and it portrayed the feeling of the song. It needs to be a bit louder though. Can you get more volume in the first key, or does the sound get "stuck" between your throat and your chest?

 

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