Members wro Posted January 6, 2015 Members Share Posted January 6, 2015 this is my tribute to cream's white room. just the basics for now. any feedback would be appreciated ! https://soundcloud.com/wagner-rodrigues-5/white-room-first-mix/s-WJHpN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members highmtn Posted January 13, 2015 Members Share Posted January 13, 2015 @wro, Your guitar is covering up the voice a bit too much. The recording of your voice is distorted, so the record level was set too high, even though your voice is too low in the mix. In the third verse your pitch was wandering a bit. Your E4's and F4's were just a bit flat and sounded a little strained. It seemed like you were tired by the last verse. You could help that by improving breath support, and take the load off your vocal cords. Overall, you did a good job on the song. Bob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members wro Posted January 16, 2015 Author Members Share Posted January 16, 2015 thank you very much ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members wro Posted January 30, 2015 Author Members Share Posted January 30, 2015 so i have done a major rework on this track and i would be really happy to hear what u guys think: https://soundcloud.com/wagner-rodrigues-5/white-room-second-mix/s-IFFfn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members highmtn Posted February 1, 2015 Members Share Posted February 1, 2015 @wro, The guitar is still stronger in the mix than your vocal. Please always have the vocals prominent in recordings that are being used for vocal evaluations. The voice is not distorted now, so that is an improvement. Thanks for correcting that. The last verse is not the melody used in the rest of the song. The chorus ("I wait in this place") section needs more breath support. That will help your voice to sound more relaxed on the higher notes. This is a cool song. Bob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members wro Posted February 6, 2015 Author Members Share Posted February 6, 2015 thanks buddy, i'll keep improving ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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