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"Proper nutrition aids intellectual growth. Intelligence that thereby makes it all the more easy for groups and their members to adopt democracy"
is thereby used correctly in that sentence?
Not really. "Thereby" means "in connection with that" or "because of that." "Intelligence, in turn, makes it ..." would be more precise. As the others have pointed out, though, the sentence fragment is a bigger problem.