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  • New Tune - Recorded Using PreSonus Studio One

    It still sounds like my usual noisy ****************e, though

    It's called Food Chain. I hope y'all like it

    https://soundcloud.com/songwriter101/food-chain

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  • #2
    It rocks Homes! Only thing is bring the lead guitar up there at the last. Cool lyrics, great playing, great production!
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    • #3
      Thanks, AJ! And thanks for the Soundcloud comment

      I didn't want to overdo the volume on the lead guitars, since there are three parts playing in unison
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      • #4
        According to Ernest Buckley's predictions for 2015: "1) Mark will eventually come to the Dark Side and start using his DAW full time."
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        • #5
          Originally posted by MarkydeSad View Post
          It still sounds like my usual noisy ****************e, though

          It's called Food Chain. I hope y'all like it

          https://soundcloud.com/songwriter101/food-chain

          it's great, mark. the bridge is fantastic and makes the song.



          your level of professionalism continues to astound


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          • #6
            Originally posted by Anderton View Post
            According to Ernest Buckley's predictions for 2015: "1) Mark will eventually come to the Dark Side and start using his DAW full time."
            Ernest is a prophet!
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            • #7
              Originally posted by Goober(s) View Post


              it's great, mark. the bridge is fantastic and makes the song.



              your level of professionalism continues to astound

              Thanks, matey
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              • #8
                Originally posted by Anderton View Post
                According to Ernest Buckley's predictions for 2015: "1) Mark will eventually come to the Dark Side and start using his DAW full time."
                Exactly.


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                • #9
                  Originally posted by MarkydeSad View Post

                  Ernest is a prophet!
                  Yes, I am. Glad you noticed.


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                  • #10
                    Mark,

                    I really like the tune. The lyrics are simple but potent, exactly what I love.

                    More of this Mark and when you`re ready, lets put it all on 1 huge album!

                    And btw, the drums which I know you are just starting to get the hang of, sound like they belong so you`re right on track mate. Trust your instincts.

                    The force is strong with you.

                    E





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                    • #11
                      Wonderful song, no frills, fantastic flow. The only suggestion I'd make is I'd love to hear a background keyboard part like a Hammond in the section from 1:37 to 29...I think that would help break up the arrangement a bit.

                      You should really try not doubling your voice sometime. If you're concerned about pitch, hey, there's Melodyne! Your background vocals on my new song sound fine when isolated. You could use the single voice when you wanted a stronger connection to the listener, then revert to doubled for choruses and such.

                      Also I think the guitar level at the end is fine because it sounds like the effect you want is that it has to fight a little bit to be heard. Sometimes I want vocals to sound like they're fighting to be heard, sometimes I want them to "pop" and the same can apply to any lead.

                      BTW I'd forgotten about Your Online Dream, what a great song!! It was a real treat to have it come on afterward. I think it's time to go trolling through Sound Cloud and pick another Mark L song to cover.
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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by Anderton View Post
                        If you're concerned about pitch, hey, there's Melodyne!



                        I can`t believe you went there.

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by Ernest Buckley View Post




                          I can`t believe you went there.

                          Of course I did! If a vocal is great except for one note that drops pitch toward the end, then fix it. No one will hear a difference, no one will care, and you won't have to recut or punch the vocal.

                          Melodyne is also great to un-pitch correct. Sometimes when I do doubling some lines are exactly on pitch. It's really hard for me to sing a couple cents flat or sharp, but Melodyne makes it easy to uncorrect "correct" vocals.
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                          • #14
                            I was only joking mate… after the AT thread…. I thought the topic was off limits.

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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by Ernest Buckley View Post
                              Mark,

                              I really like the tune. The lyrics are simple but potent, exactly what I love.

                              More of this Mark and when you`re ready, lets put it all on 1 huge album!

                              And btw, the drums which I know you are just starting to get the hang of, sound like they belong so you`re right on track mate. Trust your instincts.

                              The force is strong with you.

                              E




                              Thanks, mate
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