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  • The Return of...Is Your Music Any Good? Find Out Here!

    This thread, where people would post links to their music and others would critique the music, was always a mainstay of this forum. But it got out of hand, with thousands of posts; and other forums started doing the same thing, so I didn't want to be redundant.



    However...that was then, and this is now. With it being so easy to post your music online, it seems like there's more of a need than ever for people to do honest critiques of other's works. And I thought about all the panels I used to be on for songwriters and such...so, IT'S BACK! Post away.



    One request: Be courteous to others. If there's a big discussion going on about a particular tune, let it play out for a bit before you submit your own material.



    Let's see what happens.........
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  • #2





    Originally posted by Anderton

    The Return of...



    Is this the Son of the Return of.......???
    "If Obama wins a second term I will leave the forum". - Visconti

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    • #3





      Originally posted by Anderton

      The Return of...



      Is this the Son of the Return of.......???
      "If Obama wins a second term I will leave the forum". - Visconti

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      • #4
        Well, all righty, then. I just happen to be recording my second solo album right now, so I might as well get some feedback on my working mixes, bearing in mind, of course, the fact that these are, after all, just MP3 files.



        Lemon Frosting - April F's Mix



        Lovely Day - Mix 09



        BTW, I was formerly, and am still currently, known as "Bunny" over at MusicPlayer.com, for those old skool (actually, middle skool) SSS folkes in da house! Heheh.
        www.myspace.com/bunnyknutson
        www.BunnyKnutson.com

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        • #5
          Well, all righty, then. I just happen to be recording my second solo album right now, so I might as well get some feedback on my working mixes, bearing in mind, of course, the fact that these are, after all, just MP3 files.



          Lemon Frosting - April F's Mix



          Lovely Day - Mix 09



          BTW, I was formerly, and am still currently, known as "Bunny" over at MusicPlayer.com, for those old skool (actually, middle skool) SSS folkes in da house! Heheh.
          www.myspace.com/bunnyknutson
          www.BunnyKnutson.com

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          • AlamoJoe
            AlamoJoe commented
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            Johnny Storm wrote:
            Well, all righty, then. I just happen to be recording my second solo album right now, so I might as well get some feedback on my working mixes, bearing in mind, of course, the fact that these are, after all, just MP3 files.

            Lemon Frosting - April F's Mix

            Lovely Day - Mix 09

            BTW, I was formerly, and am still currently, known as "Bunny" over at MusicPlayer.com, for those old skool (actually, middle skool) SSS folkes in da house! Heheh.

            Hey I thought "Lemon Frosting" was a hoot! Really don't go for Rap-influenced anything but then again I'm an old fart. But "Lemon Frosting" was tasty! Pun intended.


        • #6
          I dig your stuff, Bunny! Very quirky and cool. "Lemon Frosting" is a really happy sorta tune. I really dig your bass playing on the second tune, too..



          The only thing I might change a bit, and it's a personal preference...that odd riff in the second one that takes over about 2/3 the way through...it's cool, but to my conventional ears, it belongs in a different piece, either that or make it shorter and go back to the original theme. I think I know what you're going for, so it's just my opinion.



          And, BTW..."The Fast Food Vortex" is on my regular playlist...



          Okee, I'll put up a target for you dart throwers out there...I was playing around with a nylon string, and I got this sorta "McCartney-esque, Billy Joel-esque" idea for sort of a Bossa-ish tune. It's a rough, so that's fine. I think when this recording was done, I was still trying to cop the phrasing for the verses, so there are a couple of places where the lyrics seem to be kinda "run-on"... but it's basically just nylon acoustic, steel acoustic, and voice...



          I think I've posted it before, but I can't remember where (or why, for that matter)



          The Way It Goes


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          • #7
            I dig your stuff, Bunny! Very quirky and cool. "Lemon Frosting" is a really happy sorta tune. I really dig your bass playing on the second tune, too..



            The only thing I might change a bit, and it's a personal preference...that odd riff in the second one that takes over about 2/3 the way through...it's cool, but to my conventional ears, it belongs in a different piece, either that or make it shorter and go back to the original theme. I think I know what you're going for, so it's just my opinion.



            And, BTW..."The Fast Food Vortex" is on my regular playlist...



            Okee, I'll put up a target for you dart throwers out there...I was playing around with a nylon string, and I got this sorta "McCartney-esque, Billy Joel-esque" idea for sort of a Bossa-ish tune. It's a rough, so that's fine. I think when this recording was done, I was still trying to cop the phrasing for the verses, so there are a couple of places where the lyrics seem to be kinda "run-on"... but it's basically just nylon acoustic, steel acoustic, and voice...



            I think I've posted it before, but I can't remember where (or why, for that matter)



            The Way It Goes


            My Space

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            • #8
              Thanks, Ted! And I agree that the transition in "Lovely Day" is quite harsh, but it's intended to be so. It represents a moment of realization, where everything else stops, and an entirely new thought process starts. A revelatory moment, if you will - and I'm sure you will.



              The song is about a raver in the '90s, who suddenly has an epiphany about what's really going on.



              BTW, "The Fast Food Vortex" was a sort of collaboration between me and Jeff da Weasel. The lyrics were taken entirely from a post he made at MP.
              www.myspace.com/bunnyknutson
              www.BunnyKnutson.com

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              • #9
                Thanks, Ted! And I agree that the transition in "Lovely Day" is quite harsh, but it's intended to be so. It represents a moment of realization, where everything else stops, and an entirely new thought process starts. A revelatory moment, if you will - and I'm sure you will.



                The song is about a raver in the '90s, who suddenly has an epiphany about what's really going on.



                BTW, "The Fast Food Vortex" was a sort of collaboration between me and Jeff da Weasel. The lyrics were taken entirely from a post he made at MP.
                www.myspace.com/bunnyknutson
                www.BunnyKnutson.com

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                • #10





                  Originally posted by Tedster



                  The Way It Goes







                  Wow, I really like that, Ted. While I'm listening to it, I'm cutting the EQ below 100 Hz, and it's sounding very nice and balanced. It's a really sweet song.
                  www.myspace.com/bunnyknutson
                  www.BunnyKnutson.com

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                  • #11





                    Originally posted by Tedster



                    The Way It Goes







                    Wow, I really like that, Ted. While I'm listening to it, I'm cutting the EQ below 100 Hz, and it's sounding very nice and balanced. It's a really sweet song.
                    www.myspace.com/bunnyknutson
                    www.BunnyKnutson.com

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                    • #12
                      I have those relatov...er...relevat...er, those moments you speak of once in awh...MMMMM...DONUTS... (snarf snarf snarf narf munch)







                      Thanks for the positive feedback on my tune, too. And while I'm at it, a cover track (if anyone will indulge me on a cover track)...just 'cuz I like the tune. I hear a couple vocal doubles that need cleaning up, but udderwise, my take on an old classic:



                      Walk Away, Renee
                      My Space

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                      • #13
                        I have those relatov...er...relevat...er, those moments you speak of once in awh...MMMMM...DONUTS... (snarf snarf snarf narf munch)







                        Thanks for the positive feedback on my tune, too. And while I'm at it, a cover track (if anyone will indulge me on a cover track)...just 'cuz I like the tune. I hear a couple vocal doubles that need cleaning up, but udderwise, my take on an old classic:



                        Walk Away, Renee
                        My Space

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                        • #14
                          Yea I dig Bunny's stuff too Ted...he's a new Myspace friend of mine and checked out his tunes!! I was diggin hard!!!!....



                          Ted..I gotta listen to yours. Will do so.

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                          • #15
                            Yea I dig Bunny's stuff too Ted...he's a new Myspace friend of mine and checked out his tunes!! I was diggin hard!!!!....



                            Ted..I gotta listen to yours. Will do so.

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