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    Working Title is "Steer Into The Skid".

    Steer Into The Skid

    VI
    Stepped outside and caught myself a dandelion wish
    Closed my eyes, held my breath and let it roll onto the wind
    I don’t think it will come true
    None of the others did
    Sometimes instead of turning left you got to steer into the skid

    VII
    Walked on down the road and I kicked a can
    Staring at my shoes but they don’t understand
    That time is slipping by
    Without a care
    It’s hard to tell the difference between here and nowhere

    C
    I don’t know but I think I got left behind
    By people who don’t know that they're the taking kind
    Reflections in the mirror never show a soul
    A heart don’t do you any good with no one
    To hold

    VIII
    Sometimes I think I’ll go ahead and just disappear
    Cut free from all these strings hat keep me hanging round here
    Gravity and reality put my feet
    Back in the Ground
    I guess I just keep getting lost just hoping to be found

    C
    I don’t know but I think I got left behind
    By people who don’t know that they're the taking kind
    Reflections in the mirror never show a soul
    A heart don’t do you any good with no one
    To hold

    VIV
    I laid down in a field of green under a setting sky
    Wished upon a shooting star as it raced on by
    I don’t think it will come true
    None of the other did
    Sometimes instead of turning left you got to steer into the skid

    C
    I don’t know but I think I got left behind
    By people who don’t know that they're the taking kind
    Reflections in the mirror never show a soul
    A heart don’t do you any good with no one
    To hold

    I don’t know but I think I got left behind
    By people who don’t know that they're the taking kind
    Reflections in the mirror never show a soul
    A heart don’t do you any good with no one
    Last edited by tony333; 05-18-2017, 05:42 PM.

  • #2
    'they're', not 'their'... I would revisit some of the vernacular..and not go to a chorus after every verse.
    "We are currently experiencing some technical difficulties due to reality fluctuations. The elves are working tirelessly to patch the correct version of reality. Activities here have been temporarily disabled since the fundamentals of mathematics, physics and reason may be incomprehensible during this indeterminate period of instability. Normal service will be restored once we are certain as to what 'normal' is."

    Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally used up and worn out, shouting '...man, what a ride!'
    "The greatness of a man is not in how much wealth he acquires, but in his integrity and his ability to affect those around him positively" ~Bob Marley

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    • #3
      I might be wrong but look slike the meter is off on the last line of V1

      Stepped outside and caught myself a dandelion wish
      Closed my eyes, held my breath and let it roll onto the wind
      I don’t think it will come true
      None of the others did
      Sometimes instead of turning left you got to steer into the skid

      How about

      Stepped outside and caught myself a dandelion wish
      Closed my eyes, held my breath and let it roll onto the wind
      I don’t think it will come true
      None of the others did
      Sometimes you've got to make the choice to steer into the skid

      or

      Stepped outside and caught myself a dandelion wish
      Closed my eyes, held my breath and let it roll onto the wind
      I don’t think it will come true
      None of the others did
      Sometimes you've got to force yourself to steer into the skid
      Last edited by stickboymusic; 05-18-2017, 03:18 AM.

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      • #4
        Thanks. The "turning left" lline is there for a specific reason. I would rather not loose it I do like your "forced to turn" though. I think it looks of meter because of how I wrote it. When I sing it out loud it seems to work. I am going to try to get a rough version posted soon.

        Again thanks for taking the time
        Last edited by tony333; 05-18-2017, 05:41 PM.

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        • #5
          Real rough but you can get the idea. Yes I know monotonous and I am aware that I can not sing lick.

          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4KIS...ature=youtu.be

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          • #6
            Sometimes I think I’ll go ahead and just disappear
            Cut free from all these strings hat keep me hanging round here
            Gravity and reality put my feet
            Back in the Ground
            I gu​ess I just keep getting lost just hoping to be found
            a10, color switch

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