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  • I Can't Jump (March 2017 song)

    My newest completion is "I Can't Jump". I used one of the episodes from the tv show "Cheers", as the blue print for this one. It has nothing to do with a problem of mine.

    https://www.reverbnation.com/silverb...90-i-cant-jump

    First there's the shock
    Than There's pain
    Than there's the ping pong blame
    I shared my side
    She said I'm right
    Still I sleep alone at night
    And Every night is long without her
    And the reasons that she gone is just a blur

    Chorus

    I'm so bloody sad
    But I can't jump
    I've lost all I had
    But I can't jump
    Every thing gone wrong, yeah it's all bad
    I'm so bloody sad
    But I can't jump

    I lost my joy
    Lost my sun
    I lost her way of fun
    She filled my need
    She made my day
    She left me wishing shed stay
    And every day is dull without her
    And the reasons that she gone is just a blur

    Repeat chorus

    My whole world's been so much duller
    Since she's been gone my life been smaller
    I've been such a mess, but I can't jump

    Album
    Just A Fan - https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/ju...n/id1145579818


  • #2
    Nice lyrics! Looking forward to hear more of your music in the future

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    • #3
      I like the lyrics, thanks for posting! I love that phrase "ping-pong blame". I think the song would be stronger if the second verse moved the story along somehow, though, instead of repeating the same information with different words. Maybe something more about how she left, or what's keeping you from jumping.

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