Members rsadasiv Posted June 14, 2015 Members Share Posted June 14, 2015 A response to Cul De Sac Ennui. Needs a bridge. If you want her to danceYou just pull back on this stringIf you want her to singYou push on her chinIf you want her to smileThere's a tab under her cheekIf you want her to laughYou tickle her knee If you want him to danceYou've got to take him by the handIf you want him to singYou've got to teach him the wordsIf you want him to smileYou should ask if he's okIf you want him to laughYou should tell him a joke If you want me to danceJust start dancing in your roomI'll hear your stepAnd come and join inIf you want me to singYou just sing your favorite songI'll will join inI know all the wordsIf you want me to smileYou can be just who you areWe can smile and laughJust give me a callCause I'll still be hereAwaiting your call Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mbfrancis Posted June 15, 2015 Members Share Posted June 15, 2015 A response to Cul De Sac Ennui. I don't know what that is. Is this a song of yours that you want feedback on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rhino55 Posted June 15, 2015 Members Share Posted June 15, 2015 I think Cul De Sac Ennui was the lyric he posted by somebody else. Lyrically this is great. I think the "if you want" has the potential to get old, but depending on how it is presented, it could be fantastic. Not sure how you'd work it in but there might be some room for some no hands on the stripper talk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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