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Strippers and Smog


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A response to Cul De Sac Ennui. Needs a bridge.

 

 

If you want her to dance

You just pull back on this string

If you want her to sing

You push on her chin

If you want her to smile

There's a tab under her cheek

If you want her to laugh

You tickle her knee

 

If you want him to dance

You've got to take him by the hand

If you want him to sing

You've got to teach him the words

If you want him to smile

You should ask if he's ok

If you want him to laugh

You should tell him a joke

 

If you want me to dance

Just start dancing in your room

I'll hear your step

And come and join in

If you want me to sing

You just sing your favorite song

I'll will join in

I know all the words

If you want me to smile

You can be just who you are

We can smile and laugh

Just give me a call

Cause I'll still be here

Awaiting your call

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I think Cul De Sac Ennui was the lyric he posted by somebody else.

 

Lyrically this is great.

 

I think the "if you want" has the potential to get old, but depending on how it is presented, it could be fantastic.

 

Not sure how you'd work it in but there might be some room for some no hands on the stripper talk.

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