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Where You Belong


jecswp

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Hi all,

 

Please check out my new song:

www.soundcloud.com/joeweppelman/belong

 

This is the first time I've managed to come up with lyrics and music for the same song. I still can't sing them, though, so you'll have to use your imagination :D2

Any critiques regarding lyrics, arrangement, sound, etc. are welcome.

 

Thanks for your time,

 

Joe

 

 

V1

Go on then, go

Where ever your heart leads

To find whatever it needs

To make you feel alive

 

Don't you think twice

'Bout what your leaving behind

Don't let it worry your pretty mind

We both know it won't

 

C

When he lets you down and you need a soft place to land

You know where you can find me, just hold out your hand

I'll take you back with me and right all he's done wrong

You know you'll always have a place

Right here where you belong

 

V2

People say I'm a fool

To let you do me this way

But I don't listen to what they got to say

They don't know our love

 

It's nothing personal

It doesn't mean we're through

It's just something that you gotta do

I don't take it too hard.

 

C

When he lets you down and you need a soft place to land

You know where you can find me, just hold out your hand

I'll take you back with me and right all he's done wrong

You know you'll always have a place

Right here where you belong

 

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I like it so far.

 

The lyric on the chorus could use a bit of tweaking.

 

When he lets you down and you need a soft place to land

You know where you can find me, just hold out your hand

I'll take you back with me and right all he's done wrong

You know you'll always have a place

Right here where you belong

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