Members jecswp Posted February 18, 2015 Members Share Posted February 18, 2015 Hi all, Please check out my new song: www.soundcloud.com/joeweppelman/belong This is the first time I've managed to come up with lyrics and music for the same song. I still can't sing them, though, so you'll have to use your imagination Any critiques regarding lyrics, arrangement, sound, etc. are welcome. Thanks for your time, Joe V1 Go on then, go Where ever your heart leads To find whatever it needs To make you feel alive Don't you think twice 'Bout what your leaving behind Don't let it worry your pretty mind We both know it won't C When he lets you down and you need a soft place to land You know where you can find me, just hold out your hand I'll take you back with me and right all he's done wrong You know you'll always have a place Right here where you belong V2 People say I'm a fool To let you do me this way But I don't listen to what they got to say They don't know our love It's nothing personal It doesn't mean we're through It's just something that you gotta do I don't take it too hard. C When he lets you down and you need a soft place to land You know where you can find me, just hold out your hand I'll take you back with me and right all he's done wrong You know you'll always have a place Right here where you belong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted February 19, 2015 Members Share Posted February 19, 2015 I like it so far. The lyric on the chorus could use a bit of tweaking. When he lets you down and you need a soft place to landYou know where you can find me, just hold out your handI'll take you back with me and right all he's done wrongYou know you'll always have a placeRight here where you belong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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