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    TITLE>>>>cuz you can always...

    if you pull your socks up baby
    i think you'll find it easier to stand
    won't hafta worry bout yer scars now baby
    you can raise a toast and feel gone
    take in the air, yeah block out the sun
    cuz yer mom and dad ain't hangin' round no more
    no yer mom and dad ain't hangin round

    just look at yer dresses
    and yer dogeared magazines
    you can do better than that, hon
    you can do better than that

    you got so wise
    you got so smart
    you got so lost
    and you go so hurt
    but that don't matter now, babe
    you ain't gotta be so quiet

    no you don't hafta be so quiet
    no you don't hafta be so quiet
    no you don't hafta be so quiet

    cuz you can always
    take the words from my mouth

    cuz you can always
    take the words from my mouth

    cuz you can always
    take the words from my mouth

    the churchbells and the bright blue eyes
    those are the things that tipped my hand
    yer autumn breath and yer summer skin
    you got me to fall, now just let me in
    cuz i can wait here as long as you, babe
    I can wait as long as you

    silver rings
    sell yer silver rings
    to buy the silver things
    trade yer silver for her silver wings

    silver rings
    sell yer silver rings
    to buy the silver things
    trade yer silver for her silver wings

    just look at yer dresses
    and yer dogeared magazines
    you can do better than me, hon
    you can do better than me

    but that don't matter now, so
    you ain't gotta be so quiet
    no you don't hafta be so quiet

    cuz you can always
    take the words from my mouth

    cuz you can always
    take the words from my mouth

    cuz you can always
    take the words from my mouth

  • #2
    no feedback?

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    • #3
      Originally posted by dmattrape
      no feedback?


      What kind of music are thinking about setting it to? It seems a little repetitive but it will depend on the melody..
      Alwayz MisBhavin

      Music is a moral law. It gives soul to the universe, wings to the mind, flight to the imagination, and charm and gaiety to life and to everything. - Plato
      *******************
      Be - As a page that aches for a word
      Which speaks on a theme that is timeless... Neil Diamond

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      • #4
        not bad......you got creative with the silver verses,it's interesting but is it country music or a ballad

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        • #5
          it's a stupid art rock type song. prolly mid tempo.

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          • #6
            "You don't hafta be so quiet
            cuz you can always take the
            words from my mouth"


            Love these lines. Kind of a double meaning - You can take my words and use them for your own (don't be so quiet) or you leave me speechless. Clever. I like it.

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            • #7
              glad you like 'em.

              this is a song that's kinda stuck in limbo right now b/c my band is mired in a backlog of new material and I'm not sure if this fits us so...

              it's good to here that there's something worthwhile going on.

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