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  • got it bad - started over ^_^

    OK I started over, this time with a pensil and bottle of wine and
    my guitar. Instead of wirting it at work on my computer.

    first part...

    intro and transition
    | B / Am / C / G | / Em

    | Am / C / G / Em| / Em / G / Em / G

    | C / E |

    [repeat]



    I think I got it bad
    but i want it worse
    it might make me sad
    so I do not rehearse
    a fealing got me hurtin
    I might need a nurse


    [chorus 1]
    change the locks
    bolt the door
    open my eyes
    its not here no more


    I think I got it bad
    but i want it worse
    playing tricks on my mind
    laying on her curse
    kick off my shoes fall into bed
    voodoo momma wanna see me dead


    [chorus 2]
    close my eyes
    and I can not see
    sitting in my room
    its still haunting me


    Copyright 2003 Bryce Sharp // rubrduky ltd.
    bereft of reason
    pondering the suiside of kings
    alone with my innocense
    waiting quietly for anything
    ~bryce sharp

  • #2
    much better!

    let's hear how it sounds with the music and we'll go from there!

    good improvements man

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    • #3
      One small suggestion . . . I would remove the "I think" in the first line of the chorus, so it just says "I got it bad, but I want it worse" (I love this line, by the way).

      You've done a really good job here and I agree with ClusterOne that the changes from the first version are great. What type of music do you want to set it to?

      P.S. I really like the verse in your signature "bereft of reason . . . . waiting quietly for anything." Is that from another song?

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      • #4
        Well the name of the song is "I got it bad(but I want it worse)"

        the music is a moderate tempo guitar strum into on the chords I specified

        B //| Am //| C /| G // Em //| (full strums)

        little bit on G // Em

        then the vocals come in...

        // when I hit the chords here the low e is muted and I am hiting
        low e and the fingered Strings.

        (Am)I {think} got it (C) bad but I (G) want it (Em)worse
        |G // Em| for a bar then continue

        No that was just something wrote for my sig. Though I may use it some day..

        When I get a chance to play it with my dad ( who is a drummer ) the tempo and rhythm my end up changing a bit.


        So what do you think this song is about?
        bereft of reason
        pondering the suiside of kings
        alone with my innocense
        waiting quietly for anything
        ~bryce sharp

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        • #5
          I'm picturing a herion addict locked in his apartment, lying in his bed . . . "I might need a nurse" . . . . "voodoo mama wanna see me dead" . . . a self-detox attempt. I could be way off. Could be a woman-done-me-wrong song. Maybe your mention of Neuromancer in my thread is giving me images of drug use.

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          • #6
            just a song about "Desire and longing" can be applied to anything. Don't do drugs, but i have.


            most likly its about a woman I desperatly want but can't stand... talk about a paradox. that girl drives me freekin berserk!
            bereft of reason
            pondering the suiside of kings
            alone with my innocense
            waiting quietly for anything
            ~bryce sharp

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