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OK I started over, this time with a pensil and bottle of wine and

my guitar. Instead of wirting it at work on my computer.

 

first part...

 

intro and transition

| B / Am / C / G | / Em

 

| Am / C / G / Em| / Em / G / Em / G

 

| C / E |

 

[repeat]

 

 

 

I think I got it bad

but i want it worse

it might make me sad

so I do not rehearse

a fealing got me hurtin

I might need a nurse

 

 

[chorus 1]

change the locks

bolt the door

open my eyes

its not here no more

 

 

I think I got it bad

but i want it worse

playing tricks on my mind

laying on her curse

kick off my shoes fall into bed

voodoo momma wanna see me dead

 

 

[chorus 2]

close my eyes

and I can not see

sitting in my room

its still haunting me

 

 

Copyright 2003 Bryce Sharp // rubrduky ltd.

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One small suggestion . . . I would remove the "I think" in the first line of the chorus, so it just says "I got it bad, but I want it worse" (I love this line, by the way).

 

You've done a really good job here and I agree with ClusterOne that the changes from the first version are great. What type of music do you want to set it to?

 

P.S. I really like the verse in your signature "bereft of reason . . . . waiting quietly for anything." Is that from another song?

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Well the name of the song is "I got it bad(but I want it worse)"

 

the music is a moderate tempo guitar strum into on the chords I specified

 

B //| Am //| C /| G // Em //| (full strums)

 

little bit on G // Em

 

then the vocals come in...

 

// when I hit the chords here the low e is muted and I am hiting

low e and the fingered Strings.

 

(Am)I {think} got it © bad but I (G) want it (Em)worse

|G // Em| for a bar then continue

 

No that was just something wrote for my sig. Though I may use it some day..

 

When I get a chance to play it with my dad ( who is a drummer ) the tempo and rhythm my end up changing a bit.

 

 

So what do you think this song is about?

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I'm picturing a herion addict locked in his apartment, lying in his bed . . . "I might need a nurse" . . . . "voodoo mama wanna see me dead" . . . a self-detox attempt. I could be way off. Could be a woman-done-me-wrong song. Maybe your mention of Neuromancer in my thread is giving me images of drug use.

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just a song about "Desire and longing" can be applied to anything. Don't do drugs, but i have.

 

 

most likly its about a woman I desperatly want but can't stand... talk about a paradox. that girl drives me freekin berserk!

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