Members magnetic Posted April 10, 2003 Members Share Posted April 10, 2003 OK I started over, this time with a pensil and bottle of wine and my guitar. Instead of wirting it at work on my computer. first part... intro and transition | B / Am / C / G | / Em | Am / C / G / Em| / Em / G / Em / G | C / E | [repeat] I think I got it bad but i want it worse it might make me sad so I do not rehearse a fealing got me hurtin I might need a nurse [chorus 1] change the locks bolt the door open my eyes its not here no more I think I got it bad but i want it worse playing tricks on my mind laying on her curse kick off my shoes fall into bed voodoo momma wanna see me dead [chorus 2] close my eyes and I can not see sitting in my room its still haunting me Copyright 2003 Bryce Sharp // rubrduky ltd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ClusterOne Posted April 10, 2003 Members Share Posted April 10, 2003 much better! let's hear how it sounds with the music and we'll go from there! good improvements man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ChiGirl Posted April 11, 2003 Members Share Posted April 11, 2003 One small suggestion . . . I would remove the "I think" in the first line of the chorus, so it just says "I got it bad, but I want it worse" (I love this line, by the way). You've done a really good job here and I agree with ClusterOne that the changes from the first version are great. What type of music do you want to set it to? P.S. I really like the verse in your signature "bereft of reason . . . . waiting quietly for anything." Is that from another song? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members magnetic Posted April 11, 2003 Author Members Share Posted April 11, 2003 Well the name of the song is "I got it bad(but I want it worse)" the music is a moderate tempo guitar strum into on the chords I specified B //| Am //| C /| G // Em //| (full strums) little bit on G // Em then the vocals come in... // when I hit the chords here the low e is muted and I am hiting low e and the fingered Strings. (Am)I {think} got it © bad but I (G) want it (Em)worse|G // Em| for a bar then continue No that was just something wrote for my sig. Though I may use it some day.. When I get a chance to play it with my dad ( who is a drummer ) the tempo and rhythm my end up changing a bit. So what do you think this song is about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ChiGirl Posted April 11, 2003 Members Share Posted April 11, 2003 I'm picturing a herion addict locked in his apartment, lying in his bed . . . "I might need a nurse" . . . . "voodoo mama wanna see me dead" . . . a self-detox attempt. I could be way off. Could be a woman-done-me-wrong song. Maybe your mention of Neuromancer in my thread is giving me images of drug use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members magnetic Posted April 11, 2003 Author Members Share Posted April 11, 2003 just a song about "Desire and longing" can be applied to anything. Don't do drugs, but i have. most likly its about a woman I desperatly want but can't stand... talk about a paradox. that girl drives me freekin berserk! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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