Members BrokenRomeo Posted September 28, 2014 Members Share Posted September 28, 2014 Tried a few things I don't normally do, fuzz distortion guitar tones and a 6/8 time sig in a rock tune...hope someone enjoys it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Oswlek Posted September 29, 2014 Members Share Posted September 29, 2014 I did! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members BrokenRomeo Posted September 29, 2014 Author Members Share Posted September 29, 2014 Thanks!! And thanks for listening... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mbfrancis Posted September 30, 2014 Members Share Posted September 30, 2014 Hey if you want us to critique the song, please post lyrics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted September 30, 2014 Moderators Share Posted September 30, 2014 I love the track and have lots of input at the ready. The forum is for works in progress. Are you intending to work this more? I love the fuzzy vibe. Let us know if you're willing to let us give input to possibly improve this track. It's really good. I think I could be nudged into "great" territory... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members BrokenRomeo Posted September 30, 2014 Author Members Share Posted September 30, 2014 Yes Lee, I am always looking for feedback, and consider my songs works in progress that can be tweaked for improvement, so fire away...lyrics below for the guy that asked. Thanks for listening guys. White Noise (Black Hearts) You go on and on About nothing that’s going on And I, think you know how I feel about that Yeah, Yeah, Yeah I turn on my TV And I, scroll through 300 channels It makes me wanna put a bullet in my brain And you oughta know by now This won’t get us very far The writing is on the wall And we’re right back where we were So I sit at my computer And surf my life away All I see is selfies, sex tapes and street fist fights (Chorus) White noise, is all I ever hear Black hearts, to see them is so clear In time, things changeI know we can't go backIn a better worldWe'd take the good and leave the bad (repeat Chorus) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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