Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 23, 2014 Moderators Share Posted August 23, 2014 I went through some of my older stuff and found this. Totally forgot about it. I sorta like it . A lot. It was sort if a drunken night of silliness but... Is this worth pursuing further? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted August 23, 2014 Members Share Posted August 23, 2014 I like it a lot. It started out sounding like it might turn into a hip, alt country song. I guess it's the fiddle. Wow, I really like the break toward the end! Hell yes it's worth working on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 23, 2014 Author Moderators Share Posted August 23, 2014 Cool, Lee C K! Bee3? Wanna play? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bee3 Posted August 23, 2014 Members Share Posted August 23, 2014 Sounds good... I'm in. Love the song. Killer groove. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 23, 2014 Author Moderators Share Posted August 23, 2014 Cranked Hammond solo! More B3 pad and fills in chorus with lots of Leslie speed shifting and slurs! Clavinet funk with my guitar in verses? You sing the octave doubles? You could either replace or supplement, whatever is comfy for you. I'll try and extend it and send it over soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mbfrancis Posted August 23, 2014 Members Share Posted August 23, 2014 Hey Lee this is very very cool - I'm racing off on vacation for a few days but can be more intelligent when I get back. Organ will be awesome. Only thing that struck me a little was the restatement of the title at the end of the chorus...maybe a little heavy-handed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 23, 2014 Author Moderators Share Posted August 23, 2014 I'm totally open but have NO idea what I'd do instead of the title. I think I like the repeat of the title but... I'm open. Maybe a bridge would help with that Martin? Or hmmmm.... Maybe just truncate the final line of the chorus to "make way..," the idea, if it isn't clear, is that the good stuff, adult relationships, sex, mature love, they do arrive even when an adolescent feels like it is eons away and may never show up for them. So substituting the last line, make way for the good thing, with something as silly as a Billy Gibbons-like "cause it's a- comin', baby". I think I sort of like, make way for the good thing still. Trust me kid, it's comin', make some room in your life because this is the good stuff coming up. Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mbfrancis Posted August 23, 2014 Members Share Posted August 23, 2014 It's not the restatement itself but the way it's done, a little too punctuated. Inelegant, I guess. I could be alone here (often am). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 23, 2014 Author Moderators Share Posted August 23, 2014 Gotcha. I may be able to do more of a whisper. Thanks, that is good thinking. To make a bit of ear candy hook out of that bit right there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted August 24, 2014 Members Share Posted August 24, 2014 Don't remember this one at all. But WOW what a tune...what a groove! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted August 24, 2014 Author Moderators Share Posted August 24, 2014 Cool! Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members greennn01 Posted August 27, 2014 Members Share Posted August 27, 2014 I don't remember it but it is great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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