Some Lyrics For Your Comments / Criticism

[elbow]

Ok.. here's one that I wrote a little while back. All my songs are loosely based on some experiences that I, or someone I know, has had. Ever had one of those things happen, where you just have to say, screw it.. nothing I can do about it now?

 

I think I need a chorus or another verse or something, but my partner keeps telling me it's fine..and we do the first or second verse twice for a third verse.

 

Title: Anyway, Alright

 

Drivin' home late last night

Been drinkin' and feelin' right

I had quite scare when I looked in the mirror

And saw those police lights

He said shut her down son, I think you're done

We're headin to jail for the night...

Anyway, alright

 

Break.. short solo

 

My woman is seldom home

Been leavin' me all alone

I came home from work all covered in dirt

And flipped all the lights back on

Her clothes were all gone, I couldn't be wrong

She left like a thief in the night...

Anyway, alright

 

Break.. full solo

 

then fade out with:

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

[Dr. Tweedbucket]

Originally posted by elbow Ok.. here's one that I wrote a little while back. All my songs are loosely based on some experiences that I, or someone I know, has had. Ever had one of those things happen, where you just have to say, screw it.. nothing I can do about it now? I think I need a chorus or another verse or something, but my partner keeps telling me it's fine..and we do the first or second verse twice for a third verse. Title: Anyway, Alright Drivin' home late last night Been drinkin' and feelin' right I had quite scare when I looked in the mirror And saw those police lights He said shut her down son, I think you're done We're headin to jail for the night... Anyway, alright Break.. short solo My woman is seldom home Been leavin' me all alone I came home from work all covered in dirt And flipped all the lights back on Her clothes were all gone, I couldn't be wrong She left like a thief in the night... Anyway, alright Break.. full solo then fade out with: Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright

 

 

 

wow!!!

 

 

 

That song, if played live deserves a poorly programmed robot in control of a fully loaded shotgun at the end of the song, shootin up the amps maybe some of the stage lights, the mixing console and other stuff that would explode well!

 

A carefully timed smashing and burning the guitar, then throwing it into the mosh pit isn't out of the question either

[Dr. Tweedbucket]

Originally posted by elbow Ok.. here's one that I wrote a little while back. All my songs are loosely based on some experiences that I, or someone I know, has had. Ever had one of those things happen, where you just have to say, screw it.. nothing I can do about it now? I think I need a chorus or another verse or something, but my partner keeps telling me it's fine..and we do the first or second verse twice for a third verse. Title: Anyway, Alright Drivin' home late last night Been drinkin' and feelin' right I had quite scare when I looked in the mirror And saw those police lights He said shut her down son, I think you're done We're headin to jail for the night... Anyway, alright Break.. short solo My woman is seldom home Been leavin' me all alone I came home from work all covered in dirt And flipped all the lights back on Her clothes were all gone, I couldn't be wrong She left like a thief in the night... Anyway, alright Break.. full solo then fade out with: Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright

 

 

 

Here is a third verse I will sell you for $50 if you want it:

 

 

 

 

.... Ran into the kitchen and turned the stove up on high

.....made a buttered mustard sandwich, on white, not wheat or rye

....Got a notice from my landlord, the holes in the roof are my fault.

... Gamma beam defraction scene, it's phase-shift frequency rot

 

 

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

 

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

 

 

 

Smash guitar over the drummer's head

 

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

Anyway, alright

 

fade totally out.

[elbow]

Originally posted by Dr. Tweedbucket Here is a third verse I will sell you for $50 if you want it: .... Ran into the kitchen and turned the stove up on high .....made a buttered mustard sandwich, on white, not wheat or rye ....Got a notice from my landlord, the holes in the roof are my fault. ... Gamma beam defraction scene, it's phase-shift frequency rot Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Smash guitar over the drummer's head Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright Anyway, alright fade totally out.

 

I like that actually.. How much for just using the idea of smashing my guitar over the drummers head right before the fade out?

[Dr. Tweedbucket]

Originally posted by elbow I like that actually.. How much for just using the idea of smashing my guitar over the drummers head right before the fade out?

 

 

 

 

uhmmm ..... that one is on special this week for $9.99

[tompetty]

Pay no attn to Tweed....He goofs around a lot but he's a sad and sorry man....He's divorced.....His kids don't talk to him...He doesn't even have a pet....He changes his underwear daily and is as cheap as they come....They call him tightnoot....Other that that he's ok I guess but you don't want him for a friend....Friends are people you like to be around and can count on....He's neither....Best to leave him be......Close your eyes and he'll go away like the boogyman......Neither are real.....Have a nice day...