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  • FINISHED VOCALS ON MY DOOM SONG!!!

    http://soundcloud.com/brad-williamson-4/hoof-and-claw-1

    it's called hoof and claw. i think the subject matter is pretty heavy, as well as the tune. take a listen and let me know what you think, and any areas you think i might need to adjust.

    thanks!
    Originally Posted by Yarbicus


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  • #2
    you should post the lyrics
    ...

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    • #3
      "Hoof and Claw"

      With language concieved for sheer convenience
      conducive only to
      degenerate
      you speak what shall lead
      your kind's extiction
      with lies, the purpose you share,
      i do not understand

      my view from below
      watch you dependency
      your flesh withstanding not
      your strength technology
      your folly cascades of hate
      from which you sprang and grow
      your ignorance of your world
      shall be your undoing

      blind to your earth, i see
      force of the gods i choose to be

      creation i strip bear
      your solace i remove
      your knowledge and self worth
      i take from the and consume

      pray victim, disparage
      treasures mean so little now
      see through distortion
      to prove you reap what you sow
      no instinct, no insight
      with no will to survive
      now nature's new plaything
      forever at the mercy of

      hoof
      and
      claw
      Originally Posted by Yarbicus


      I love you.









      Originally Posted by Yarbicus


      I STILL love you!









      Originally Posted by CountGrishnackh


      I know that bag. I know it well. Liquor store pron. He ain't dead yet!



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      • #4
        The cymbals were a bit loud......caught my attention right from the beginning.

        Leonard Scaper

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        • #5
          yea, i think the drums may be a bit loud all together. i'm working on another mix and am backing them off some.
          Originally Posted by Yarbicus


          I love you.









          Originally Posted by Yarbicus


          I STILL love you!









          Originally Posted by CountGrishnackh


          I know that bag. I know it well. Liquor store pron. He ain't dead yet!



          Official Traverser Reverbnation
          Youtube
          Soundcloud

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          • #6
            I liked the vocals, but I think they sounded a bit

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            • #7
              Very dark and disturbing, which I'm sure is what you were going for. The vocals were a tad pitchy at times, and lagged in a few spots.....very minor though. I would suggest articulating better, I couldn't make out a word without the lyrics written out. Overall I think you did a very good job.
              http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=575709 or http://www.youtube.com/user/ccarnucci

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              • #8
                thanks guys! i'm working on a bit different mix to correct some of those problems.

                Very dark and disturbing, which I'm sure is what you were going for. The vocals were a tad pitchy at times, and lagged in a few spots.....very minor though. I would suggest articulating better, I couldn't make out a word without the lyrics written out. Overall I think you did a very good job.


                hell yes! just the lyrics, or did it transfer into the entire song as well?
                Originally Posted by Yarbicus


                I love you.









                Originally Posted by Yarbicus


                I STILL love you!









                Originally Posted by CountGrishnackh


                I know that bag. I know it well. Liquor store pron. He ain't dead yet!



                Official Traverser Reverbnation
                Youtube
                Soundcloud

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                • #9
                  The whole song.
                  http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=575709 or http://www.youtube.com/user/ccarnucci

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                  • #10
                    The whole song.


                    awesome!

                    i'll upload the new mix soon. it should fix some of the issues you guys pointed out.

                    thanks again for your input guys!
                    Originally Posted by Yarbicus


                    I love you.









                    Originally Posted by Yarbicus


                    I STILL love you!









                    Originally Posted by CountGrishnackh


                    I know that bag. I know it well. Liquor store pron. He ain't dead yet!



                    Official Traverser Reverbnation
                    Youtube
                    Soundcloud

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                    • #11
                      awesome!


                      I love this place!!!
                      Leonard Scaper

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                      • #12
                        Drums are still not good - are these samples? If so, try a different kit. Buss all the drums together, compress the snot out of them, add a little room reverb, and then compress the snot out of the drums again. Compress the snot out of the chugg/rhythm guitar, figure out where the fundamental is in the vocal, and put a notch EQ cut into the rhythm guitar at those frequencies. Highpass EQ the lead guitar and then give it some more reverb. Add a reverb over the master buss and compress the snot out of the master buss as well.

                        You want this waveform to look like a 2x4, and then you want to whack the listener over the head with it.
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                        • #13
                          Drums are still not good - are these samples? If so, try a different kit. Buss all the drums together, compress the snot out of them, add a little room reverb, and then compress the snot out of the drums again. Compress the snot out of the chugg/rhythm guitar, figure out where the fundamental is in the vocal, and put a notch EQ cut into the rhythm guitar at those frequencies. Highpass EQ the lead guitar and then give it some more reverb. Add a reverb over the master buss and compress the snot out of the master buss as well.

                          You want this waveform to look like a 2x4, and then you want to whack the listener over the head with it.


                          no, they're not samples. it's me playing my electronic kit.


                          i'm still learning this whole DIY recording thing, so pardon my ignorance. buss together meaning pan together? and what do you mean by a notch eq?
                          Originally Posted by Yarbicus


                          I love you.









                          Originally Posted by Yarbicus


                          I STILL love you!









                          Originally Posted by CountGrishnackh


                          I know that bag. I know it well. Liquor store pron. He ain't dead yet!



                          Official Traverser Reverbnation
                          Youtube
                          Soundcloud

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                          • #14
                            also, for the compress the snot out of part, the controls i have in the audacity compressor are threshold, noise floor, ratio, attack time, and decay time. what do i need to do with those to ensure all the snot is compressed?
                            Originally Posted by Yarbicus


                            I love you.









                            Originally Posted by Yarbicus


                            I STILL love you!









                            Originally Posted by CountGrishnackh


                            I know that bag. I know it well. Liquor store pron. He ain't dead yet!



                            Official Traverser Reverbnation
                            Youtube
                            Soundcloud

                            Comment


                            • #15
                              Compress the snot out of it is purely colloquial. For drums try a fast attack, fast decay and high ratio. Buss together means combine multiple tracks into a single send track. Notch eq means that you only cut a specific frequency range from the middle of the spectrum; high pass means that you cut everything below a certain frequency; low pass means that you cut everything above a certain frequency.
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