Members Jugulator Posted January 17, 2013 Members Share Posted January 17, 2013 Hi everybody, It's been a little while since I posted the lyrics of song "Into the abyss" by Starburst here. The saga continues... Here comes the new song called "Underwater prisoners". Again, being a non-native speaker and an amateur songwriter, I'd like to hear some critique from you. Thank you in advance Here we are - Underwater prisoners Intro We Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jugulator Posted January 19, 2013 Author Members Share Posted January 19, 2013 Does this silence mean that the lyrics are flawless? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members leftyaxeman Posted January 24, 2013 Members Share Posted January 24, 2013 I would take that as a yes. Heavy metal,,,hmmm, I've been called the pointy guitar guy & shredder,,, think it was meant to be deragatory, but shredder is pretty accurate, & I do play a Jackson soloist,,, proudly I might add. Keep up the good work man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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