Members rickidoo Posted March 12, 2013 Members Share Posted March 12, 2013 A "Friend to the End" has been replaced by the updated "Happy Birthday, My Friend" (See my updated post) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted March 12, 2013 Members Share Posted March 12, 2013 Very nice, Rick.It meanders a bit, but it leaves me with a warm feeling. Nothing wrong with that, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted March 12, 2013 Members Share Posted March 12, 2013 Oh, and as per usual, the tune is still jingle-jangling inside my head... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rsadasiv Posted March 12, 2013 Members Share Posted March 12, 2013 LCK wrote: Very nice, Rick. It meanders a bit, but it leaves me with a warm feeling. Nothing wrong with that, right? +1. It's got a jaunty little groove going in the electric piano. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Members Oswlek Posted March 12, 2013 Members Share Posted March 12, 2013 Great song, Rick. There are only things I'd change.1) Turn the second line of the first chorus to: "and think of the people I've passed" Make it more action there, metaphorical.2) The guitar sound is a little off. I almost sounds like sleigh bells when it first comes in.Other than that, it is perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rickidoo Posted March 13, 2013 Author Members Share Posted March 13, 2013 Thank you for your feedback. Instead, I threw a stick of dynamite in the song and redid it with new words, and a new approach on the music. It has been renamed, too:Happy Birthday, My Friend©2013 Richard DieffenbachV1:Happy birthday, my friendIt's me, again Although you can't hear what I sayPlease talk to me anyway V2: Happy birthday, my love.I think of you, above And all the times we laughed aloudWhile chasing windswept cloudshappy birthday my friendCHORUS:She loved to sail a windy seaSip her morning tea Share her hugs with only mePainting pictures that she sawSew a quilt spread on the floorTeach her children how to dance, how to love and how to laugh V3:Happy birthday, goodbyeThe day you left me, angels criedYou always said the sun would rise Even when there are tears in my eyes CHORUS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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