Members rickidoo Posted March 28, 2013 Members Share Posted March 28, 2013 Anything too familiar in this tune? This is just a proof of concept partial demo. Some gibberish words in places. So I am not listing the lyrics in this post. No other feedback needed, its too early. Rick She's the Kind of Woman ©2013 Rick Dieffenbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members oldgitplayer Posted March 28, 2013 Members Share Posted March 28, 2013 This is a cool variation on a standard R&B riff - I like it.Lyrically you have too many words in the primary line. 'She's the kind of woman' sounds hurried over the laid back backing. I suggest you reduce it to :The kind of woman ..................The kind of woman ...................The kind of woman ..................The kind of woman ...................She's the kind of woman for me.But go for it, it's got good potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted March 28, 2013 Members Share Posted March 28, 2013 oldgitplayer wrote: This is a cool variation on a standard R&B riff - I like it. Lyrically you have too many words in the primary line. 'She's the kind of woman' sounds hurried over the laid back backing. I suggest you reduce it to : I disagree totally. I really like the way "she's-the-kind-of woman" sounds.The riff is really cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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