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She's the Kind of Woman


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This is a cool variation on a standard R&B riff - I like it.

Lyrically you have too many words in the primary line. 'She's the kind of woman' sounds hurried over the laid back backing. I suggest you reduce it to :

The kind of woman ..................

The kind of woman ...................

The kind of woman ..................

The kind of woman ...................

She's the kind of woman for me.

But go for it, it's got good potential.

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oldgitplayer wrote:

 

 

This is a cool variation on a standard R&B riff - I like it.

 

Lyrically you have too many words in the primary line. 'She's the kind of woman' sounds hurried over the laid back backing. I suggest you reduce it to :

 

I disagree totally. I really like the way "she's-the-kind-of woman" sounds.

The riff is really cool.

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