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  • She's the Kind of Woman

    Anything too familiar in this tune? 

    This is just a proof of concept partial demo. Some gibberish words in places. So I am not listing the lyrics in this post. No other feedback needed, its too early.


    Rick

     

    She's the Kind of Woman
    (c)2013 Rick Dieffenbach

     

    "Now and then... occasionally... it seems to have.... too many notes"

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    This is a cool variation on a standard R&B riff - I like it.

    Lyrically you have too many words in the primary line. 'She's the kind of woman' sounds hurried over the laid back backing. I suggest you reduce it to :

    The kind of woman ..................

    The kind of woman ...................

    The kind of woman ..................

    The kind of woman ...................

    She's the kind of woman for me.

    But go for it, it's got good potential.

    'Music is your own experience, your thoughts, your wisdom. If you don't live it, it won't come out of your horn'.
    CHARLIE PARKER

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    • LCK
      LCK commented
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      oldgitplayer wrote:

      This is a cool variation on a standard R&B riff - I like it.

      Lyrically you have too many words in the primary line. 'She's the kind of woman' sounds hurried over the laid back backing. I suggest you reduce it to :


      I disagree totally. I really like the way "she's-the-kind-of woman" sounds.

      The riff is really cool.



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