Final version of the lyric? The track -- Alan Fuqua (piano), Dave Carpenter (bass), Peter Erskine (drums) -- is in Eb, so the high notes are too high for me to sing well. As a result, I've adjusted the tune a little here and there.
The main questions are, does this version of the lyric fit the mood of the tune and feel finished to you? (Words in bold are new changes, written after I recorded the tune.)
Sunlit patches of grass and trees,
screen door latches and buzzing bees,
and a walk down the block for chocolate malts,