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  • #16
    Thanks Rick. I have some ideas for the final product... production-wise. Glad you like it. Really need to nail the vocals on this one... I have a separate 'outro' part but I'm not sure if I'll include it yet. It's really designed to lift it up in a 'major' sense.

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    • #17






      Quote Originally Posted by Oswlek
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      I learned a long time ago that your music solves nearly every lyric problem imaginable....




      QFT. The flute is much too loud, but I doubt that is where it will be once things are finalized.



      BTW, I can totally see this being a big production, in the "Comfortably Numb" vein. But I don't think it needs to be. It was totally en rapt simply as is.
      Don't listen to Justin.
      LCK - 2/21/2012

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      • #18






        Quote Originally Posted by Monkey Uncle
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        your voice really opened up and let go, and I heard a depth of feeling that I don't think I've ever heard from you before.




        Really.



        This is a great song.
        Leonard Scaper

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        • #19
          Great again my friend



          This bit is SO melodic



          When all the world is crashing around me

          Will you be the one to show me things?

          Cause that is all I need



          That I feel a rhyme may make it even stronger



          something like (maybe not a great lyric but there for illustration so you can see how it sings)



          When all the world is crashing 'round me

          Im just glad that you have found me

          Cause that is all I need

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          • #20
            Hey Stick... not sure if I'm feeling that... I tried singing something similar, and I just couldn't get it to flow.



            So I did a live video for this still unfinished song... well, the performance is live. Flute is overdubbed.






            http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zgg4BGJRrpk

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            • #21






              Quote Originally Posted by bee3
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              Hey Stick... not sure if I'm feeling that... I tried singing something similar, and I just couldn't get it to flow.



              So I did a live video for this still unfinished song... well, the performance is live. Flute is overdubbed.






              http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zgg4BGJRrpk




              Oh my. Really. That's great.



              Be the one to show me how to breathe... in That line. That turn of the chords and the swoop up on br--EATHE! That's beautiful. Then the down arc of "i...in". I dig it immensely. The whole thing's got a wonderful yearning for this comfort and love you need. It's really cool. Perfect to me.
              __________
              Ain't no sacrilege to call Elvis king
              Dad is great and all but he never could sing -
              Jesus

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              • #22
                Thanks Lee.... the problem I have after doing one of these vids, even though the effort is miminal, is getting off my ass and recording it properly.

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                • #23
                  no kidding...
                  __________
                  Ain't no sacrilege to call Elvis king
                  Dad is great and all but he never could sing -
                  Jesus

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                  • #24






                    Quote Originally Posted by Lee Knight
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                    no kidding...




                    You've noticed?

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                    • #25
                      Still love this song.
                      Don't listen to Justin.
                      LCK - 2/21/2012

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                      • #26






                        Quote Originally Posted by bee3
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                        You've noticed?




                        not you!!!! me!!!! I meant it is a pain for me too!!!
                        __________
                        Ain't no sacrilege to call Elvis king
                        Dad is great and all but he never could sing -
                        Jesus

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                        • #27
                          Phew... I thought you might be keeping a running log of all the songs I haven't finished yet. To wit:



                          Be My Star

                          Have a Spirit and Smile

                          Good Intent

                          I Gave it All

                          I've Got Time

                          Lipstick Blow

                          Too My Love

                          There's That Moon Again



                          I've actually started and not finished many, many more than I've completed. It's a bad habit.

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                          • #28
                            It's a splendid song, and so what if it has to sit in a queue to be finished.

                            I'm amazed that you get as much done as you do already, given work, wife, kids - the full catastrophe.
                            'Music is your own experience, your thoughts, your wisdom. If you don't live it, it won't come out of your horn'.
                            CHARLIE PARKER

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                            • #29






                              Quote Originally Posted by oldgitplayer
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                              It's a splendid song, and so what if it has to sit in a queue to be finished.

                              I'm amazed that you get as much done as you do already, given work, wife, kids - the full catastrophe.




                              From a songwriting perspective, I'd say it is finished, or at least it can be. Sure, it may not be everything you were envisioning from an arrangement standpoint, but that video is awesome. Put it out there and be proud of it. When you get around to recording your album, you can tweak the arrangement to your heart's content.
                              Beware of deepities.-- Daniel Dennett

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                              • #30
                                I like it. Not bad at all.
                                V/R Mike Johnson

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