"Bottle" bridge idea

[Lee Knight]

So, I've been working up this country tune of mine, Dancing with the Bottle Tonight. I think it needs a bridge. Hopefully very simple and reiterating the hook.

 

 

V1

Holding you tight, swayin' to the rhythm of the band

Tonight... you might be my only friend

I'm not dancing on my own, I've got you in my hand

A few more rounds for this old heart to mend

 

C1

So will you be my partner as I glide across the floor?

Will you be here waiting... when I come back for more?

How I wish it was her I was holdin' tight

But I'm dancin' with the bottle tonight

Yeah, I'm just dancin' with the bottle tonight

 

V2

I'm not feelin' any pain, not anything at all

Bottle, you've done all that you can do

You've washed away my misery, lift'd me from a fall

Come mornin', I'll have a different point of view

 

C2

So will you be my partner as I glide across the floor?

Will you be here waiting... when I come back for more?

How I wish it was her I was holdin' tight

But I'm dancin' with the bottle tonight

Yeah, I'm just dancin' with the bottle tonight

 

BRIDGE

Yeah, I'm dancing with the bottle

Spin me 'round, dip me down

Don't drop me on the floor

Dancing with the bottle

Who say I don't need anymore?

Uno mas, por favor

 

Or

 

Yeah, I'm dancing with the bottle

Spin you 'round, dip you down

But I won't drop you on the floor

Dancing with the bottle out the door

 

(shades of O's tune^ ^ ^)

 

What you think????

[LCK]

 

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Lee Knight wrote:

 

 

So, I've been working up this country tune of mine, Dancing with the Bottle Tonight. I think it needs a bridge. Hopefully very simple and reiterating the hook.

 

 

BRIDGE

Yeah, I'm dancing with the bottle

Spin

her

'round, dip

her

down

Don't drop her on the floor

Dancing

till she's empty then

 

Who says I don't need anymore?

Uno mas, por favor

 

 

 

 

What you think????

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I think it's great. I just made a few suggestions.

[Lee Knight]

YES!!!!!!!! Appropriated.