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  • "Bottle" bridge idea

    So, I've been working up this country tune of mine, Dancing with the Bottle Tonight. I think it needs a bridge. Hopefully very simple and reiterating the hook.

     

     

    V1

    Holding you tight, swayin' to the rhythm of the band

    Tonight... you might be my only friend

    I'm not dancing on my own, I've got you in my hand

    A few more rounds for this old heart to mend

     

    C1

    So will you be my partner as I glide across the floor?

    Will you be here waiting... when I come back for more?

    How I wish it was her I was holdin' tight

    But I'm dancin' with the bottle tonight

    Yeah, I'm just dancin' with the bottle tonight

     

    V2

    I'm not feelin' any pain, not anything at all

    Bottle, you've done all that you can do

    You've washed away my misery, lift'd me from a fall

    Come mornin', I'll have a different point of view

     

    C2

    So will you be my partner as I glide across the floor?

    Will you be here waiting... when I come back for more?

    How I wish it was her I was holdin' tight

    But I'm dancin' with the bottle tonight

    Yeah, I'm just dancin' with the bottle tonight

     

    BRIDGE

    Yeah, I'm dancing with the bottle

    Spin me 'round, dip me down

    Don't drop me on the floor

    Dancing with the bottle

    Who say I don't need anymore?

    Uno mas, por favor

     

    Or

     

    Yeah, I'm dancing with the bottle

    Spin you 'round, dip you down

    But I won't drop you on the floor

    Dancing with the bottle out the door

     

    (shades of O's tune^ ^ ^)

     

    What you think????

    __________
    Your god doesn't exist but my god does and he is all loving. If you disagree with me I'll kill you. - Prince Ea

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    Lee Knight wrote:

    So, I've been working up this country tune of mine, Dancing with the Bottle Tonight. I think it needs a bridge. Hopefully very simple and reiterating the hook.

     

    BRIDGE

    Yeah, I'm dancing with the bottle

    Spin her 'round, dip her down

    Don't drop her on the floor

    Dancing till she's empty then

    Who says I don't need anymore?

    Uno mas, por favor



    What you think????


    I think it's great. I just made a few suggestions.

    “I think you make yourself an antenna for songs, and songs want to be around you. And then they bring other songs along, and then they’re all sittin’ around, and they’re drinking your beer, and they’re sleeping on the floor.” —Tom Waits

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    • Lee Knight
      Lee Knight commented
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      YES!!!!!!!! Appropriated.



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